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Beautiful Dove

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Beautiful Dove

Beautiful dove
perhaps it is
your midnight hair
shadow eyes
the song of your voice
that draws me to you
like a river to the sea...

What do you dream 
in your dreams?
I dream to know
your desires that sleep
within your deepest well...

Impaled in my chest
thorn of passion for you
I would pluck it out
but my heart would go numb...

In my endless sky
there is space for you
you the gypsy moon to move
a moon for my eyes to linger
I dream to see
moonlight trickle down
caressing the curves of your body...

Tonight mi cielo
I seek your moonlight face
the soft tender touch
of your flower bud hands
I thirst to drink
from your nectar voice
and passionately kiss
your rose red lips...

I will savor
the fragrant breeze
coming from the dark forest
of your silken hair
and climb the two mountains
that are your breasts...

Two breasts
two conquerors
that battle for control
of the sphere of your bosom...

My Spanish dove
you need not
utter a word
we are lovers
I the sun
you the lunar
we are alone
one the other
so naked
wrapping ourselves
in the unsayable...



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  1. Date: 9/19/2013 11:38:00 PM

    deep and powerful words of love and passion. The reader can feel the sincerity in your words and how you expressed them. good job

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 9/19/2013 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Robin, You're most kind.. Ken
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 10:47:00 PM

    The more I read from you the more I like your words/ soul ;} I wrote one called Sun and Moon ;}

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 8/29/2013 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Debbie, Thanks for the wonderful comment.. Ken..
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:59:00 PM

    I always liked this one Ken. A really great write from you with sensual tones that speaks to the hearts core. Brilliant!

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 8/28/2013 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi M.M. thanks buddy for the comment...Hope all is well with you my friend.. Ken..
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 5:39:00 PM

    Amazing poem powerfully delivered...i applaud you! Faith

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 8/26/2013 5:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Faith, Thank you for the kind compliment and for visiting today...Regards, Ken
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 1:30:00 PM

    Passionate and romantic lines that you have penned..Wonder if it is for the contest or just for your love?...Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 8/26/2013 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Sara, Thanks for commenting on this poem... Regards, Ken..
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:46:00 AM

    Lovely...sensual, sincere, and true...:) The one who inspires you is beautiful indeed! I'm sure she will treasure this!

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 8/26/2013 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HI Eileen, Thank you for the most lovely comment and for stopping by today.. Ken..
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:29:00 AM

    - Spanish love (dove) .... beautiful and romantic written Kenneth! - Admiring your poem with pleasure. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 8/26/2013 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne, Thank you for the lovely comment and for stopping by.. Ken
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:56:00 AM

    Kenneth, this is beyond lovely. I love how your heart expresses one of it's own. Every detail above is amazing. the imagery, is perfect and sensual. You sure are the best respectful and sensual poet on the soup. I've never read a poem, that lead my imagination to it's core. enjoyed The Spanish Dove poem.. PD

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 8/26/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hola mi paloma, Happy you like it...Perhaps the title could have been different but i thought it expressed intent..As always thanks for visiting... Muchos Besos, Ken..