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truth awakens

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Below is the poem entitled truth awakens which was written by poet liam mcdaid. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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truth awakens

blue cold awakening
in tears 
of darkness
falling
within the eyes

inner vision 
clouds the sky
unheard words
spoken within
the soul

in the scrapyard
of the mind
sitting on the tip
silent whispers
on the tongue within

in deep waters
I remain silent
its not me
you
are tainted

I leave 
as I walk
a different path
out from 
the darkness

heading towards 
a rainbow
this aint love
cruel abuse
of the word
in light
of truth

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  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:54:00 PM
    wow...powerful poem...so many beautiful lines throughout...enjoyed the read :)

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/30/2013 3:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU SO MUCH SANDRA FOR THE AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:18:00 PM
    A great write, I am so glad I have never experienced something like this, it is so sad, thanks for the read Liam....Peter

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/25/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    peter I would not wish it on anyone thank you for the wonderful comment have a blessed beautiful day
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 3:59:00 PM
    I relate to this , survivor of many ..I love the truth as hard as it seems for some to read, this is Real , Well Done ~

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/25/2013 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you sincerely for the beautiful comment so deeply appreciated thanks