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behind a title

the title the mask 
you find comfort in 
following me where ever I go
leaving a hint of  your name, favorite artist Lyrics
yet claiming a different Country 
As if I do not know who you are and why you have come here
I wish your intent was pure to write 
noticing the glory you have changed a profile 
and write through another claimed territory 
isn't this a form of plagiarism or Fraud 
I don't know what shall it be called 
let me be in peace

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  1. Date: 9/7/2013 4:36:00 AM
    MAY THE ANGELS LOOK ORE PENNED BEAUTIFUL

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    Date: 9/10/2013 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you my Irish Friend , with Irish Heart ..have so much talent , I can only imagine a book soon by you ;)
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 1:56:00 PM
    Oh dear, this sounds....very disturbing, Yvette! I hope whoever is bothering you...through stolen identity or plagiarism or whatever owns up! Thanks for your lovely post on my latest! :) Do take care! :)

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    Date: 8/26/2013 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh No I am stirring the pot ! There is a person who has been following me around , I will triumph ~ You are so sweet ..
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 1:35:00 PM
    - Remove the "mask" and show who you are! - Well done, Yvette! - (I have replied to your mail) - Welcome to my last posted: "Unkissed Lips" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 8/26/2013 1:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love right back to you ! Thank-you , Exactly ! remove thy mask !! Have a beautiful day my friend and poet , love , Yvette
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 12:43:00 PM
    Is it me your talking about?

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    Date: 8/26/2013 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    sorry " The Thrill is Gone " BB King . In any form of social media , there is the light and the dark . Cyber bullies do exist and plagiarism, it is a uncomfortable subject matter .
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    Date: 8/26/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am not sure ..is it ? This is a poem ..and yes it is inspired by true events , I am not pointing finger , just like when a singer sings " The feeling is gone " Eric Clapton , or old blues writer ..someone in the audience will think the singer is speaking to them .short answer , no.
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    Date: 8/26/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , I appreciate your perspective and this poem is causing a bit of a stir , but in poetry ..maybe that is a good thing . Go for your dream Karen , I understand why some remain hidden too .
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 12:32:00 PM
    I like perspective and creativity of this...Most writers (with any worth )will let their work to speak for itself. without regard tthe 'photo' in the profile. I would rather be judged on my work than a pretty face. I am writing a piece about changing my name... hope it doesn't cause too much suspicion ** SMILES**

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    Date: 8/26/2013 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh dear , the response up above is for you ! No perfection here , love , yvette
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:45:00 AM
    interesting poem I think you hit the nail on the head.

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    Date: 8/26/2013 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well Thank-you my dear ! I have seen your writing and enjoy reading .
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:46:00 AM
    Hi Yvette, I enjoyed the topic in this one.. Regards, Ken

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    Date: 8/26/2013 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Kenneth , well, it is alive and well . I think to some degree , we all by mistake may write something that has been written , not because we intended to copy .This is My Dark cloud that follows me where ever I go . I have wonderful people I have met here , you are one ! Yvette
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 6:31:00 AM
    Hi Yvette First time I am stopping by, and found this poem to be very intriguing. I think your subject matter is probably something that needs to be addressed. Enjoyed the emotions behind this write.

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    Date: 8/26/2013 8:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    not all with avatar and mask are with bad intent .. I happened to notice a few odd similarities , well let me say less , too many similarities !
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    Date: 8/26/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Kim , You are beautiful , sweet , and without a mask show your true colors , love , yvette
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:21:00 PM
    Very good write Yvette, I enjoyed....peter

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    Date: 8/25/2013 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Peter, I am honored by such a poet as you !
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 10:27:00 AM
    Well penned.Noticing the glory you have changed a profile....i loved it.New friend LITAN

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    Date: 8/25/2013 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you My new friend , Yvette Looking forward to reading yours !
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 8:08:00 AM
    My, someone has been busy!! This one is nice and quite abstract, Yvette you are coming into your own -the rest of us on Soup beware!!! Good Job! MC

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    Date: 8/25/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you My favorite poet ~ I appreciate all you say and write , Yvette