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At Summer's End

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At Summer's End

When Autumn veils my season's smile and lingers in the air a while . . . though Indian days be gold spun, my summering will come undone. Night's shadows fall more quickly now; birds sooner too forsake their bough. No tarrying for old friend Sun when summering becomes undone. Oh, warmth of Summer, leave me not. Through Winter's frost I grow distraught. The melancholy has begun; my summering will come undone. As Autumn veils my season's smile, my summering will come undone. (kyrielle in sonnet form) 8/24/13 For Summer's End contest of Francine Roberts

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  1. Date: 11/8/2013 7:01:00 AM

    To think you wrote this in the summer and it's already winter brrrrrrr. Congratulations Petal, just shows how time flies. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 4:59:00 PM

    "Autumn veils my season's smile." Hard to let summer go. Congrats, Andrea!

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:06:00 PM

    lovely win...SKAT

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 11:25:00 AM

    Good day Andrea congratulations on your Summer's End win... luv~ PD

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 12:44:00 AM

    My favorite and an excellent win and well chosen by Francine! Congrats Andrea.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:49:00 PM

    Lovely piece, Andrea. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 7:59:00 AM

    beautiful....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 12:26:00 AM

    Another summer has passed us by. Hope there are many more to come for all those we care for...This one is a winner..Rick

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 10:41:00 PM

    Yes summer is nearly at the end. Need to pick up the kids from the airport tomorrow coming in from Washington. Did not go with them this time and lucky because a lot of places were closed. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:38:00 PM

    What a wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 1:08:00 AM

    Great writing and sharing; in this most thoughtful write Andrea..'

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:55:00 PM

    Much as I love the colours of Autumn I rue the passing of summer and its natural warmth. Lovely poem Petal but it's left me cold haha. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:39:00 PM

    I love the use of summering. lovely poem. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:39:00 AM

    Absolutely beautiful as always. You are a very gifted poet, dear Andrea. Elaine

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 1:33:00 AM

    Thanks for your comments on my latest Phrasis verse form Andrea.I am still posting about a dozen verses each month,in particular these phrasis which are also recited on youtube.Have a good weekend.rgds Brian

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:44:00 PM

    I particularly love the line "though Indian days be gold spun". Elicits many visual responses

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 3:38:00 AM

    Nice job. i've enjoyed reading your poetry

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 3:39:00 PM

    Another season past it's prime. Another reason and a rhyme. The past is written to not be read. Time marches on, enough is said. Beautiful poem Andrea. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:17:00 PM

    Your summering will come done here surely. It's a poem carrying lovely season's smile as you. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 10:52:00 AM

    wow a poem to blow one away with, you are a joy to read Andrea Dietrich,

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 10:07:00 AM

    Ahh!! Very poetic in quality..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:07:00 AM

    THERE IS POETRY ALL OVER THESE PAGES....THEN THERE IS YOURS....A CUT ABOVE THE REST!!! A BIG WIDE SCATHING CUT....You are The BEST!!!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 5:44:00 AM

    Beautiful. - Red

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 3:43:00 AM

    A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE REALLY ENJOYABLE

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:02:00 PM

    ABSOLUTELY SUPERB! Andrea...your command of words is awe inspiring. I mean that. It's not some gushy sentimental mush, although I AM in that mood at the moment! Thanks for your comment on my latest poem. I'm horrified that you saw the mistakes I had in that one. My dear, I posted it at 2:00 am. It just popped into my head, and I had to get it out. Shame on me. Why didn't you point them out? I would have taken it from you with grace! Next time! Silly red line! Overinvest IS one word! ;) HUGS!!!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/26/2013 11:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    BTW....Like a beautiful stream of water, the words of this poem flow from the source, right into our hearts. Nothing hinders the flow! It's just THAT beautiful! :)
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 10:28:00 PM

    Wow Andrea, your first stanza just blew me away and l think you chose the perfect form to use for this contest. Sure it will fair well.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:37:00 PM

    It is beautifully flowing and I like the repetition you used here. Good work! Thanks BTW for commenting on my verse today. Was nice to get home from work and see you in my com box :) Made my blessed day, that much nicer. Thanks again! Goodnight Andrea. Lucinda

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 6:21:00 PM

    This is beautifully written...so many good lines to quote...I love it! ...and I hate to see summer end....

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 3:50:00 PM

    A wonderful poem, you are heading towards your winter, we are heading for summer...I love it all, I love the change of seasons...Thanks for the readf. it looks like a winner to me...Peter

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:31:00 AM

    a very clever write, my friend - love it

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