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SAND




Spritely now, powdered grains brush on the docks And then rouse four winds,draped among treetops Naming stars, through far up painted moonlight Dressed in rhinestones , gold-dust hails summer rites. For Andrea Dietrich's Contest Four-Letter Words:An Acrostic ChallengePoetry 28 August 13

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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:55:00 PM

    Hi Nette, another awesome win...PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 1:42:00 PM

    Very poetic winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 7:51:00 AM

    You paint a beautiful picture of a summertime treasure. Cheers, Rach

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:03:00 PM

    Beautiful piece...Congrats on your win....

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 4:07:00 PM

    Wonderful write, congratulations on your win...Peter

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 3:48:00 PM

    Excellent poem, missed to read but now made up. Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:59:00 PM

    Nette, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:43:00 PM

    Nette, congrats on your win with this magical acrostic! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:06:00 AM

    How did you make this usually pesky substance sound so beautiful?..congratulations nette..

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:10:00 PM

    congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:42:00 PM

    you took the sand up into the moon and stars. So lovely, Nette. Congrats on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:46:00 AM

    Hi Nette! You sure gave sand some falir here! Your acrostic sure is very cool! And glad to know you were safe from maring-- buti na lang, hindi ganung katindi yung sumunod! Balik pork barrel scam naman...again it was my pleasure to call in that day and to listen to you and Drake-- it was a fun show! Ang saya kaya and a joy na magbigay suporta in my own way. You back in Manila? Basta, ingat lagi and sending hugs!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 7:37:00 PM

    I have always loved the beach...something about the ocean kissing the sand and the way it all shines...you have brought the beauty to us and made me long to see the beach this summer....beautiful and well written! hugs

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:32:00 PM

    You are truly gifted Nette..I've always felt that way about you. :) if for a contest good luck...a winner!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 5:43:00 PM

    Point me to the sands! Sand and surf the perfect combination, toss in some stars and I am in heaven. Well done Nette.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:59:00 AM

    Nette....you made sand sound so beautiful...well done! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:13:00 AM

    Excellent. Very creative write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:41:00 PM

    Your poetry just blows me away nette,, beautiful

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:38:00 AM

    "Summer rites"! As beautiful, as a summer rite can be. Thank you for it! :) G.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:40:00 PM

    Grains of sand, as plethora as the stars in the night sky! I really enjoyed reading the part of the last line, "gold-dust hails summer rites" that describes summer by the very words you have used! What a beautiful piece, such a superior verse! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:31:00 PM

    You make me want to wish that summer would never end, delightful xxx

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Very creative for an acrostic..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..That sand can get everywhere...Sara

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:11:00 PM

    Wow.........this is what talent can do with four letter words !! Less is more !!!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:50:00 PM

    good acrostic Nette gl Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:31:00 PM

    Hi Nette..today I just thought of you..Hope you are safe..and I thought of Nikko.too..I know there was a typhoon..Seeing you here means you re well i guess..A lovely acrostic..'Naming stars,through far up moonlight-Pure magic in this line dear.