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Love's Disaster

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Love's Disaster

To say everything thats meant to be said
But not fully understanding an outcome
In one we surely expect
We accept an understanding without much meaning.
Because we're both afraid of what our truth have yet to reveal,
We feel as though we should keep quiet
Maybe silent
Let our emotions take cover
Discover
What we wanted
But unable to find
How do we let tears speak
Without sounding out so much pain
Without having to retain
From shouting
And doubting
That what we know is true,
That there is so much more
Then saying i love you.
If it's not being shown
It wouldnt be known
Just an absence
Abandon in an uncertain state
Not fate
That keeps bringing us
Back thru memories
Once shared,
We cared.
But now where do we stand?
Do we understand no end is yet permitted
For truths have been admitted
In a silent fixture of rebroken
Ties
More lies.
Beneath each truth not promised
And thats where our communication fails.

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  1. Date: 8/24/2013 9:16:00 AM

    Deep Judith, when looking into the eyes of a broken love. . Your first poem on the soup is excellent and fun for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:03:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup, Judith ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:57:00 PM

    Hello Judith, true it is when love is a disaster that fails and can't be fix. I very much enjoyed this brilliant piece, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@