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RATS

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RATS

Rodents that stealthily invade a home,
Agile and able to crawl through tight spaces.
Troublesome pests that chew holes and leave droppings,
Scurrilous scavengers with beady-eyed faces.

8/23/13
For Andrea Dietrich's Four Letter Word Acrostic contest.

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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:54:00 PM
    yikes.. you wrote on rats... enjoyed Kim, well done...Linda

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 1:41:00 PM
    Great winning work.Creative way to go..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 5:14:00 PM
    That is a rat and hate the nasty creatures. Thank you for my placement on your contest for the road trip. It was a terrible trip and so hot we nearly died each day. We also had a camera melt on the back window. Never knew it could get so hot. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 3:08:00 PM
    Beautifully written Kim, congratulations on your win; a very worthy win too....Peter

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:59:00 PM
    Kim, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Now that really describes them....congratulations on your win....

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:09:00 PM
    nicely done...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:48:00 PM
    My boys had pet rats about a year ago, smarter and cleaner then hamsters. I'm glad they didn't want more when they died though. Terrific write and win! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:24:00 PM
    congrats on your win Kim

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:41:00 PM
    I love the great vocabulary you used in describing rats. Loved that last beady eyed faces line!!! Big congrats, Kim.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:24:00 PM
    We have bats in our garage........but thankfully no rats !!! Neither would be even better !! Well done, Kim !!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 10:08:00 AM
    - Let the cat out ..... nasty rats ... Luck in contest, Kim! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)