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Apocalypse

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Apocalypse

It was then all things changed , life came to a end 
The ones left too suffer , the many taken
left to wonder if I to should follow

No something says stay 
you must try through all the pain 
you can survive to tell the stories

what we are now , what we were 
we must try to live and forgive 
rebuild and learn all over

but I am so Thirsty 
my hunger is begging for a bug
please give me a drop of water 

I am full of fever and shock
where is water 
 how can I boil this mud

It turns into night 
           I am truly scarred 
one more day I try 
            stay surrounded by Death's Gate .

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  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:37:00 AM

    HUNGER IS BEGGING I WROTE ONE MYSELF ON THE SAME SUBJECT COMING SIGNS BEAUTIFUL I ENJOYED HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/30/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Liam. If I am up against you , you will surely take the prize :) you are such a wonderful poet ~
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 8:17:00 AM

    Words vibrantly dark in this contest poem...hope you do well, this is a pretty solid poem Yvette. You'd get my vote for top rankings! Good Luck!, MC

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/25/2013 12:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you are so sweet ! Where have you been my whole life , me meet by chance or by fate ? Fate , yvette