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May I have This Dance

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May I have This Dance

In the moonlight, may I have this dance?
Take your hand in Lover's motion
For 'tis better to have this rigid Romance
Than drown myself in the Ocean...

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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 4:31:00 PM
    This is a very sweet and loving poem. Short but with a lot of emotion and feeling. Nice job my friend

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    Date: 10/15/2013 5:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Robin, The reader's interpretations are so interesting to me. It's really supposed to mean that these two people are in a bad marriage/relationship, but the person speaking is saying that it's better to have this "rigid romance" than the alternative of dying, or even having no relationship at all. Thanks for the review :)
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:47:00 AM
    In the moonlight...on a magic night.... :)

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    Date: 8/23/2013 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) <3