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I Want To Be Yours

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I Want To Be Yours

I want to be....
Your rose without a single thorn,
Your rainbow without a summer storm,
Your oyster, which contains a pearl,
Yet nobody is perfect, and I'm just a girl,
I promise I will do my very best,
To love you better than all the rest.

I want to be....
One half of our unbroken heart,
Your new beginning for love to start,
Your laughter that never ends,
Your arrow that Cupid sends,
The key that unlocks your heart,
The one with whom you never part.

I want to be....
Your sunshine without a cloudy day,
Your moonlight there to light your way,
Your music to the lyrics of a song,
A love you've longed for, for so long,
Your inspiration I want to be,
For your words of divine poetry.

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  1. Date: 3/8/2014 4:18:00 PM

    Hi Kelly, this piece flows straight into the heart. So gently does your emotion flow forth in your words of Love. This is a song that the heart sings Kelly. This is Love in its simplistic form, the pure form. Each vision just flows so effortlessly into the next. This river of words leads into a sea of Love within each heart that reads the piece. This touches the very Soul Kelly. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 3/11/2014 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Mike, it is always easy to write about love when you truly feel it in your heart and deep within your soul. This poem was my first, first place win in a contest. So, this poem will always be a special one for me. Glad you enjoyed it, my friend! I hope you are having a great day! :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:17:00 PM

    Kelly This is so sweet and full of romance. I can feel the emotion flowing from your heart onto the paper. Nice job Thanks for the fantastic comment on my Eyeful Of Emotions poem.

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:28:00 PM

    very romantic, I really loved the flow and words of deep love =)

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:26:00 AM

    Congratulations Kelly on your well-deserved win. cheers!! so beautiful poem :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 9:16:00 AM

    I am so happy that your poem placed this well! First place is always a feat of skill. It is so nice to have people to rejoice with is it not? Congratulations on the superb win of your pretty and brilliant poem!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 11:00:00 PM

    You did an amazing job with this... so lovely and musical...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 7:09:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win. Why am I not surprised? I've known you are a winner for some time... Love ya dearly.... Jake

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 6:15:00 PM

    Hi Kelly, I like your epic style.. a lovely shade of dark. congrats~ SKAT

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 4:39:00 PM

    you crafted a very romantic poem here...congrats on your win with this lovely write!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 7:52:00 AM

    Good morning Kelly, congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... glad to share the #1 spot with you... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 7:52:00 AM

    Touching and heart-felt poetry! Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 2:16:00 AM

    Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win. G.

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 2:10:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS. A great stylish poem

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 4:12:00 PM

    † Ok, But First I Must Slay Pom Bom Bay From Maymeyrey Atop My Red Rum Sleigh While Bobby Portrays His Sled Dog Rabbay With Long Sharp Fangs To Penetrate Their Thang And Then We'll Sang, Love Be My Gang, Sweet Beautiful Kelly ˜ Smile, I Couldn't Help The Joyful's Rhyme Because Love's Notes As Beauty Always Brings About A Bit In Cheer ˜ Very Beautiful Your Treasures Painting And Yes, I Love Love ˜ Thank You For Your Warm Kind Visit, Love, John

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 5:59:00 PM

    that for sure cooked the goose beautiful outstanding piece now thats poetry THE DRUMMERS LAMENT PLAYS A GOOD TUNE IF YOU WANT TO DROP IN

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 5:58:00 PM

    An exceptional poem Kelly you take us to the heart of romance, you are one beautiful soul, your poetry has much depth, how long have you been writing these gems xxx

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 8/30/2013 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have been writing poetry for about ten years. But, I have not shared them with anyone until recently!
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:45:00 PM

    A wonderful poem of love, this most certainly was a great piece of art. thank you for sharing Kelly...Peter

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 1:35:00 AM

    i wish one day a girl will come up to me give me a love poem just like this!!! I would look straight at her eyes and give one long passionate kiss

    Morgan Avatar Danesh Morgan Date: 9/4/2013 9:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow! I did not know you put this in a contest and now its 1st! Super Congrats from the bottom of my heart
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:10:00 PM

    This is amazing! The many images of the positive without the negative create a very pretty picture. And applying them to a person makes it very figurative. I like it even down to the way you want to be something good, not for yourself, but for another, and the flow of the words. Seems to me that line four has an extra word; I would take out "that" or "which". I happen to be inordinately fond of rhythmic feet, so I think iambic tetrameter would suit this poem admirably. Except for line one.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:40:00 PM

    Hello Kelly, love the poem, and the passion. how about that sunshine, and moonlight. very romantic if you ask me. absolutely beautiful and romantic. Enjoyed from first line to last. this would make a great Valentines Poem... always~SKAT~