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Lovelorn

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Lovelorn

Empty mass, devoid and vast,
Our parting words will be our last
And, oh, my Heart- in Death to cast!
For I cannot endure to relive the past
If you should go, you will steal my Soul
As half of me would become a hole
And left, sadly, to never know
How I could ever love you so...

**Gothic or Romantic Contest Entry
~JustThatArchaicPoet

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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 5:21:00 PM
    My you do have an old archaic soul, a ittle Gothi mance in it I believe, congrats on your win xxx

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/24/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks as always, Rose; I appreciate your thoughtful reviews :)
    Rose Avatar Mystic Rose
    Date: 10/24/2013 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I meant to say a little Gothi-mance, pardon moi xxx
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 2:19:00 PM
    I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this one...A deeply emotional and very heartfelt poem, BP! I loved it! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind comments!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/24/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have nothing but mad love for you, SP; thanks for making me smile <3
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:43:00 PM
    CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/23/2013 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Linda! :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:06:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, AP

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/23/2013 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Doc; I appreciate everyone stopping by :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:00:00 PM
    nice win...PD

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/23/2013 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Much appreciated, Linda :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:46:00 PM
    Congrats on the win in Georgio's contest. Another superb write from your pen.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/23/2013 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    <3 <3 <3 :)
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:31:00 PM
    Very romantic and heartbreaking. I have added you to my favorite poets list.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 8/22/2013 8:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am quite flattered. The encouragement and support I have found here has been immense, overwhelming and, moreover, quite surprising. The people here are genuine and kind, and it means the world to me. When I message you, I will explain why :)