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Below is the poem entitled Why which was written by poet Seren Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Why

He is there ......somewhere in the mist
Waiting for me..... why does he care
To give me his  heart.......am I worthy
Why do I hold back....... why can't I take that first step
Why cant I give myself ......what have I to lose
Feelings i have ......I like him
Wanting to be in his arms ...need that cuddle
Still I hold back ....why am I so unsure
Scared of losing again ..... the pain of loss
Of heart being broken ....... such a fragile heart
Why am I the fool ........ why cant I take the chance
Why cant I say yes ......why the uncertainty
Why !

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  1. Date: 8/24/2013 10:34:00 PM
    A very touching poem!! Why Indeed??

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/25/2013 1:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I dont know why just yet....Seren
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:23:00 PM
    I know this feeling, my friend - but hope you go for it, when he emerges from the mist : )

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/22/2013 7:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi my day will come, meanwhile life goes on....Seren
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 4:22:00 PM
    Say yes Serin, life is a big gamble. wonderful words...Peter

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/22/2013 7:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Peter, the word yes is so easy to say.
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 3:37:00 PM
    I don't know the answers to questions like this. I feel like a fool, but ask me about time, space, good and evil and I will write books, how strange is life my very special friend. I hope you find all the answers, and know that maybe I was doomed from the start. I continue to enjoy all of your writings.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/22/2013 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Wayland, lovely to see you here commenting on my poem....Seren
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 12:30:00 PM
    Uncertaintly loves to blind was it clear & concise. Yet, it's only power to allow such a problem: Humans. We have the power of choice. Excellent work!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/22/2013 7:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Drake....thanks or your comment ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:19:00 AM
    This is a write that is filled with a lot of emotion, filled with passionate feelings of confusion and disdain! I really loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/22/2013 9:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Russell, Thanks ..Seren.
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:09:00 AM
    Stunning! Why do I get the feeling there is more feeling struggling to break free from the words of this poem?

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/22/2013 7:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hmmm Monterey always more feelings lurking in tn background....Seren