Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Water, Sun, Cloud

Shadow Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Water, Sun, Cloud which was written by poet Shadow Hamilton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Shadow Hamilton

Best Shadow Hamilton Poems

+ Fav Poet

Water, Sun, Cloud

Water

Water flowing down
babbling, full of joyfulness
giving life to all

Sun

Soul of life are you
blazing ball of sparking fire
lighting up our world

Clouds

Gentle clouds drift by 
casting shadows over all
blanking out the sun


written 08/21/2013

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 2:14:00 PM
    the sun reflects the way it should on the second one... love all 3.... SKAT

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/21/2013 4:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Skat most encouraging Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 1:37:00 AM
    I especially liked the 1st and 3rd one. Nice try!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/21/2013 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Vassilis ty for visiting and enjoy my works Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 1:08:00 AM
    very nice, Sweetie! WAs it for any contest? Not that it has to be. Was just curious!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/21/2013 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    no just a write lol maybe one day. Ty Andrea for your time reading Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 10:21:00 PM
    Love the visuals. very descriptive

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/21/2013 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Pj Haiku's are a word painting I always think ty for encouraging remarks Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Nice. The joy of nature is a magnificent delight.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/21/2013 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes it is Christine and never the same always something new Shadow x smile