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Date Worse Than Death

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Date Worse Than Death

She checked into her room rather late Her motel had declared lowest rates But the price was to sour Compromised in the shower !! The weird owner was young Norman Bates!!
_________________________________________ For Contest Sponsored By Black Eyed Susan 8/19/13

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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Poor misguided Norman!...He should have at least taken a peak first and offered to soap up her back or something...Janet Leigh? What red-blooded american male wouldn't? Being a movie buff like me, I'm sure you know this is one of my all-time favorites...Congrats my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:13:00 PM
    oh yes, I remember Bates Motel!! Congrats, CArrie.

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Carrie, congratulations on your win ~SKAT~ :)

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 6:39:00 PM
    congrats Carrie...Linda

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 5:39:00 PM
    Hahaha..Norman shows up once again...congrats. G

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:53:00 PM
    lolCongratulations on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:41:00 PM
    Carrie, congrats on your win! I wasn't expecting the end. Very funny! (maybe not for the girl in the shower) Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Knew it was a winner..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:58:00 AM
    congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Great way to go with the poem for the contest..That would be scary and possibly life threatening..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 9:14:00 PM
    awesome limerick

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 12:56:00 AM
    haha, ME LIKES. HAve you watched the series called Norman bates? I think it's on A&E (but not right at the moment) It is an awesome show!! (telling how he became that way as based on his youth and his weird mother)

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:47:00 PM
    LOL!Enjoyed this very much.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 9:00:00 PM
    Ha Ha,,, very funny and could be fatal :)