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Road Trip

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Road Trip

Remaining time on our holidays we headed for
Ontario. It was the hottest of hot days
And sweat poured off our skins like it was dry
Desert heat upon the earthly sands

Throwing our air conditioner to full throttle we
Realized that we had chocolate bars in the back seat
In this heat they melted right inside the wrappers
Pretty soon we felt like we were melting inside our skin




note--it was 42 C everyday that week we were gone. 
Not an enjoyable road trip

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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 7:54:00 AM

    Phyllis, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:28:00 PM

    Glad to see this on the winners' list. It deserves to be there. Congrats, my friend.

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:47:00 AM

    I once had gummy watches melt on the back seat of a brand new car ...nice poem, congrats on your win!

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Sandra
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:57:00 AM

    dam hot, Congrats on your win. Morgan

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Danesh
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:44:00 AM

    Hi Phyllis, wow... sounds like you passed through Texas.. love the winning poem...Linda

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Linda
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:05:00 AM

    wow that's hot. Congratulations on your win. Rick

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Rick
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 9:35:00 PM

    Whew..funny, our air conditioner went out today and its hot! congratso n your win..Id be licking that chocolate, melted or not. BG

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Barbara
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:54:00 PM

    I just hate when my chocolate gets melted and I certainly don't like being in the heat. Sounds like a miserable trip, Phyllis, but great job writing about it. Thank you for supporting my contest and congrats on your win! Love, Kim

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for my placement in your contest. Always makes my day.
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 4:02:00 PM

    hey you did really well with this one, dearie. I like the mention of the chocolate bars. This probably happens to many of us traveling in heat!!

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks yes even had a camera melt on the back window
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:17:00 PM

    lovely write but not lovely weather for sure. I loved how you compared yourselves to the melting chocolate. Have a great week, my friend xx

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Jack
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 12:25:00 PM

    Nice poem. Sorry you had to go through all that. I have been through some pretty bad road trips myself. Here in Texas gets pretty hot too. we had 100 and more degree weather. Right now , I'm happy. we are expecting some rain for the next few days. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest..... Lucilla

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Lucilla
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:39:00 PM

    - No .... it sounded very uncomfortable, but it was nice to read .... - Good luck in the contest, Phyllis! - Xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2013 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Anne Lise