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- Heaven or Hell -

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- Heaven or Hell -



                    


                                     The night is moonless
                                     The soul feels uneasy
                                    Alone in a deep nothing
                                The horror occupies my mind
                                  Hear the demon's laughter
                              Silent scream choked in darkness
                             The body feels heavy and will loose
                               Breathing and pulse beats boils
                               Sharp claws scratching my neck
                                Long sharp nails, knife blades
                            Knowing the smell, rotten and moist
                                      Panic takes me totally
                           Is it the death breathing down my neck
                                         I have no choice?
                                 Where is the gate of heaven?  





19.08.2013
A-L  Andresen :)


(5th in the contest)

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  1. Date: 1/24/2014 6:08:00 PM
    Hi Anne Lise, I was taken aback by this one sweetheart, in a good way i must say, I'm so used to your writes being so gentle and light. Here you open up to the dark side and you do it very well. It's funny, it's like a dream I used to have when I was young. Every night the Demon chased me until the Dark Man decided to stand and fight. I never had that dream again. Sometimes we walk through the dark and you have painted your canvas with a strong darkness. Have a good day. Your Friend always..MIKE

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/25/2014 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Everyone has different sides ...... I like most the lighter side ;)))- Thanks for the nice visit and comments Mike. - welcome back when you want to read more of my poems. - Always a pleasure! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 12:20:00 PM
    NICE ONE.EXCELLENTOOOOOO

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/9/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the visit and comments, Austin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 8:30:00 AM
    Wow! I love when I can not only read the words and see the visual, but when I can FEEL it as well. What wonderful writing. :) It took me to another place so thank you for sharing!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/6/2013 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the visit and comments, Crystal. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:02:00 AM
    I HAVE BEEN THERE A FEW TIMES GOD BLESS A VERY BEAUTIFULLY PENNED PIECE

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/30/2013 5:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the visit and comments, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 8:02:00 PM
    All I can say is wow on this write. cool visual. cheri also thank you for your comments.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/29/2013 12:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments Cherl. - welcome back when you want to read more of my poems. - Always a pleasure! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 1:13:00 PM
    Amazing dark poetry, Anne-Lise! Very well done. And, thank you for your comments on my poem "Serenity". I appreciate it! Congratulations on your win, as well!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/28/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Kelly, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 7:30:00 PM
    Wow, I dream t I wrote that one!!!! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/26/2013 3:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Arthur, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Lovely and deep....Great write..Congrats on your well deserved win ,dear friend...Love Olu...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/25/2013 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the congratulations, and visit Olusequn. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Congrats on yr win. Morgan

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/25/2013 4:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the congratulations, and visit Morgan. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 2:31:00 AM
    Awesome write! I am a big fan of this kind of poetry but I'm no good at it, You are extremely good at what you do, I'm a big fan.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/25/2013 4:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Hakim, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 12:10:00 AM
    Wow very haunting, yet greatly written poem Anne- Lisa great write!!! and congrats on your win!!!! very handy work you have here! Love - Christopher!! xoxo :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/25/2013 4:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the congratulations, and visit Christopher. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 9:00:00 AM
    congrats on a great win Anne

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/24/2013 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the congratulations, Joseph. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:16:00 PM
    Good job with this one. IT's a poem of yours I do not recall seeing before. Congratulations.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/24/2013 4:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the congratulations, Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:14:00 AM
    love this, and your sheer diversity here on soup,

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/23/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Harry, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:16:00 AM
    a brilliant and very well written poem. Best wishes Linda x

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/22/2013 7:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Linda, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:53:00 AM
    Anne Lise, intense piece so different from what you normally write. Enjoyed this one too, especially the ending :) *Hugs* xx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/22/2013 5:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Wilma, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:32:00 AM
    If it is for any contest where you have to create a scene horror it would win a high point Anne. After reading your Poem the story of Dr. Faustus came to mind when he was crying for a drop of home. You have great skills Anne and thank you for your kind words on my Poem. Love and best wishes...Ravindra

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/22/2013 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Ravindra, thank you for sweet and nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 11:28:00 PM
    WAUNDERFUL POEM,TRUELY PAINLESS LOVE THE LAST LINE....ANNE THNK YOU FOR THE WARM WELCM,BUT IF I MAY ASK ARE THERE PRVT CHATTIN ROOMS HERE IF THERE ARE CULD YOU PLZ TELL ME HW TO INVYT PPL OR GET THERE...CHEERS

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/22/2013 1:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - You can write mail on "My inboxes" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 3:28:00 PM
    A great write, Anne, so intense and real...peter

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/22/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Peter, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 3:07:00 PM
    The hairs are rising on the back of my neck. Well done. Thanks for all your thoughtful visits, they are appreciated.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/22/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Richard, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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