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Peel Away the Sorrow

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Peel Away the Sorrow

Peeling you like an onion
Until I reach to your heart
Burning away the sorrow
Before it rips you apart

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  1. Date: 8/25/2013 11:38:00 AM
    Sounds like you are acting in kindness.