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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Now if I hadn't known of you and your narratives posted, I would have still read this and thought...this man is born to write! Seriously though! You bring out characters in such a colorful, hilarious and stylish way! I was entertained so much throughout. You word things originally and with real personality. It was really cool! Gosh, I need to come around your page more often. I can't wait to read more of your narrative, but first I'll read more of your lovely compositions. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 7:20:00 AM
    A nice poem but sad poem. The words could actually be sang. While I was reading it I could hear the rhythm playing in my head. Beautiful.

    Kilmer Avatar Stephen Kilmer
    Date: 8/19/2013 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Christine, it was meant to be lyrical and melodic. I may even put it to music when I get a bit braver! HA! Kilmer