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Falling Back

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Falling Back

From beginning to end there was love

this we know.

At a nights fall a dove flew,

she had to grow.

All that was built was falling and a return was long gone.

Time was of essence and no more words were needed,

Strange auras were afloat and all was lost.

Pain now fills one and regret fills another,

Soon truth will prevail and all will be at rest.

Untill it sheds some light one must forget,

One must forgive and see that no matter what 

There was love beginning to end.

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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:18:00 PM

    Jackie, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 11:03:00 AM

    I found this very touching to read...

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:56:00 AM

    Thank you everyone who has taken time to read and acknowledge my work with a comment! I have tried different websites and have never received this much feedback so I'm oh so grateful;)

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 3:43:00 AM

    This is truly a beautiful piece of work. Rick

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:39:00 AM

    Hi Jackie, Very well done! I must say you’ve managed to intertwine the theme into the poem superbly. I love the play of words in the first and last lines - it paints the picture clearly. I sure hope to read more of your work. Vicky.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 2:17:00 PM

    Hi Jackie, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ ...

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 8:54:00 AM

    Welcome to poetry soup, thank you for sharing. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 8:15:00 AM

    very beautiful write.loved it.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 6:36:00 AM

    A warm welcome to poetry soup !! Enjoyed stopping by reading your first poem !! loved it !! .................. Saanvi :))

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 6:25:00 AM

    good morning Jackie, thanks for sharing a the rumor, that love will always be around. .... deep.... , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 5:11:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup, Jackie ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)