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Title Wave

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Title Wave

I rode upon an "emerald ocean",
as I enjoyed the "magic of the night".
The sky was "dappled in light and fairy dust".
bringing hope to my "sad blue heart".

As I enjoyed the "magic of the night"
I was "seeing beyond the seen".
Bringing hope to my "sad blue heart".
It was like being "asleep with my eyes wide open".

I was "seeing beyond the seen".
My descriptive powers "inadequate to the task".
It was like being "asleep with my eyes wide open".
I felt like I was "tasting bliss".

My descriptive powers "inadequate to the task".
It was like being part of an "ancient prayer".
I felt like I was "tasting bliss".
A "blind judge" who had regained his sight.

It was like being part of an "ancient prayer".
Taking a few steps "beyond the walls of innocence".
A "blind judge" who had regained his sight.
"Melted tears" bring "freedom" at last!

Taking a few steps "beyond the walls of innocence".
The sky was "dappled in light and fairy dust".
"Melted tears" bring "freedom" at last!
I rode "upon an emerald ocean".


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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Very Nice, Both of the Title poems you wrote would have made the cut :) Thanks for entering the contest and enjoying the idea so much.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/5/2013 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My pleasure Adam
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 6:26:00 PM
    WOW Rick, this is a wonderful story in its own right, never mind the amazing way you've brought the titles together, great piece of imagination. Take care, Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/5/2013 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard.
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:53:00 AM
    Impressive piece Richard.Your rhythm was truly excellent which I like very much.Have a great day Richie.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/19/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks MH
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:08:00 PM
    Nicely done, I love the titles

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Justice. I like your pen name it makes me think of the wild west!
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Wow...I think I love this one more than the first one....or at least as much...now you have to choose!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This one has to many lines so I must stick with the first one.
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 12:55:00 PM
    Lovely, Richard....I've got to find some new adjectives! By the way...shouldn't the freedom in the last line before the last have quotation marks? Hope you are having a good Sunday...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 7:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, thanks for catching it.
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 10:03:00 AM
    Beyond the walls of innocence sad blue heart got the adequate rhythm through prayer and got freedom upon an emerald ocean of beautiful thought. Excellent beauty you have depicted with acute sensation. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks bl
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:42:00 AM
    the way you weave titles to make it into a gorgeous piece amazes me,rich!.. this interesting and creatively penned... yess!..:) huggs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Nette
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 6:32:00 AM
    smooth flow through out nice work Richard You deserve a 7

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you Manel, have a wonderful day.
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 1:27:00 AM
    I like this form of poetry, especially with your creativity Richard, and very clever construction...a joy to read

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 2:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Harry, so nice to have your visit.
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:04:00 PM
    Another excellent "Title" poem. You clearly had an enjoyable time with this. I really enjoyed how this flowed.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 2:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, who knew I could recycle the old into new.
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:42:00 PM
    This is another great work by you Richard! Descriptive power inadequate to the task ....marvellous ! All the best again ...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Red, have a good night.
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Beautifully penned Richard.Loved it!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/18/2013 2:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mustapha.
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 5:00:00 PM
    Ow gee..you managed to pack your poem with titles and make it flow beautifully Richard!!!Excellent"

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/17/2013 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Charmain, it is to long for the contest but it was fune to write.
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 4:06:00 PM
    This is a poem written by a blessed man, enjoyed your dream, how special it is when one finds this type of soul contentment, I love to read the peace inside your heart, xxx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/17/2013 4:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose. I wanted to challage my self a bit more for the title contest.