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MAN MADE HEAVEN

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MAN MADE HEAVEN

                                                   Man made heaven 
                                          yet no one has heard about it 
                                          where wrong is right as might
                                   inflicting injury horror terror and turmoil  
                               applause by defeating the justice with injustice 
                              with the means of bullying frightening and killing
                           for gaining such heaven no one has heard and seen

                          About real heaven silent soul whispers into the sense 
                            stubborn Coma dead sensation never allows to feel 
                                 material consciousness the final destination
                                    debate who have seen or touched soul
                                   say, everybody bows down before power
                                       rests upon wealth name and fame
                                          gain by whatever means use
                                            ........................................
                                                At the end only fuse.

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 10:02:00 AM
    I love it, It is trully a wonderful poem. Man made in heaven. When we gain fame, wealth, or power - at the end we have nothing. Everything stays here. Thanks for sharing and have a great day...... Lucilla

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/21/2013 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks for your comment on this poem. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:45:00 AM
    Nice write !! enjoyed stopping by reading this POWERFUL write of yours!! ..................Saanvi :))

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/21/2013 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well come my new poet friend and a lot of thanks to you for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:30:00 PM
    I like the pattern you formed with this poem, BL. At first I thought maybe you were doing the reverse challenge!!

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/21/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks for your visit and for your comment. Smile...... Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 12:03:00 PM
    - Reasonable thoughts about, what is or is not ... - I've written about "Heaven or Hell" today ..... read it if you want. - Wishing you a beautiful and great new week, my friend bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/19/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - ..... lol .... just wanted to try a different poem .... just to surprise ... it's not just flowers and love in my world :)))
    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/19/2013 12:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading my write and for your valuable comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 4:12:00 PM
    † Well, I Am Here To Say That I Have Seen Heaven * This Afore I Ever Truly Knew Anything About It's Beauty ? Yet I Do Understand In Part Where You Are Coming From Here My Dear Friend ˜ So Blind, These Lost Children Amid Their Own Disarray ? Thank You For Your Wonderful Visit, Love, John

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/17/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again my poet friend for your lovely comment. I am very happy for your true appreciation. Loved always, bl