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Blue eyed lover

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Blue eyed lover

                                         I saw you lying next to me
                                           my eyes turned moist.
                                         My lonely isolated heart 
                                            found your embrace.
                                          all promises were fulfilled
                                           how dearly we  made love 
                                          the fire that was raging within us
                                                your flirtatious move
                                                 how can I forget
                                               my blue-eyed lover
                                                  you will be  forever
                                                 a part of my dream    
                                                        

                                                              RED

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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 8:16:00 PM
    Hi Red, I just wanted to say thanks for all your positive comments. They are appreciated. Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 8:48:00 PM
    Hi Red, wow... what a dream, of passion... I had a blue eyed lover 8 years ago... enjoyed stopping by tonight... Linda

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    Date: 9/10/2013 8:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Linda..:) you are an amazing poetess..* Hugs*
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:28:00 AM
    BEAUTIFUL WORDS FLOWED OUT FROM YOUR DREAMING HEART

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    Date: 9/10/2013 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you liam...i have read ur poems , they are lovely too...
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:16:00 PM
    Hi Red, thanks for the birthday greeting.

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    Date: 9/10/2013 8:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    * Hugs* Richard...:)
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:34:00 AM
    Touching write here. Thanks for stopping by; it means a lot! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Dropping by to wish you a wonderful and fiery day Red!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:24:00 AM
    I very sweet dreamy poem. Nicely expressed :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:09:00 AM
    NICE ONE............. RED FIERY

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 6:20:00 PM
    it's good to have an imagination.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:55:00 AM
    Good morning, I am now the 100th person to read your poem. Have a great day. Enjoyed reading it again. Ready for a new one Red!

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    Date: 8/26/2013 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Richard...much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 12:06:00 AM
    Wow so powerful and very beautiful and a bit, erotic! I love it! I once had a blue eyed lover of the female species! Till she slipped away and was lost forever... :( anyway! I love it, great write Red. Love from your fellow poet and friend! - Christopher!! xoxoxo :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:25:00 PM
    These words are even more sensuous than the touch-Well expressed-

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 1:10:00 PM
    Nice write. keep the pen handy

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Hi Red dropped by to say hello.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:14:00 PM
    so sweet. I am trying to remember if I ever had a blue eyed lover. hmmm, well there is my husband. he has blue eyes. hahaha (I was thinking of all my old boyfriends and remembering all the ones with brown eyes!!)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 12:20:00 AM
    I'm ok with dreams like. I'll be more ok when it actually happens. :) Nicely written!

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 5:19:00 AM
    - A sweet and romantic love poem, Red. - Lovely! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 8/18/2013 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Anne:)
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 2:11:00 AM
    Sounds like a very satisfying dream.

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    Date: 8/18/2013 7:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes only in dreams...:)