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Was I dreaming - titles contest

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Was I dreaming - titles contest

"Last night i dreamt"  I watched the "dancing clouds"
As "I walk the shore" it  was an "unbelievable journey"
Full of "Many splendours", "a perfect  "Summer's Day" 
A "murmuration "of birds  put on "a wonderful show"
Then "rain"just like "spring showers"
I realised I was " no longer alone", "walk with me" I said
He answered with a "smouldering look"
Full of "thoughtful emotion"
I felt "naked and unadorned"
I then realised "that the flame has now gone out"
I said "sorry" as i walked away
He now "walks alone"  "whilst I sit and cry"
"was i dreaming"


Dated 17 August 2013

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  1. Date: 8/28/2013 7:19:00 PM
    Nice dark poem. I really shouldn't like these so much, but I guess it's just being able to relate. Its hard knowing that there is no going back. For whatever the reason, and letting go seems even harder. I guess I'm talking about my poem again lol, the one I didn't write here, Great work Seren.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:29:00 AM
    Wonderful way to weave titles into a beautifully flowing poem

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 9:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hans. Monterey .... Seren
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 9:42:00 AM
    I have been away for awhile.Its good to finally be able to catch back up on some of your work my friend.A fine write.Good luck in the contest.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Mustapha, nice to see you again .....Seren
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 6:35:00 AM
    Dreaming or not.. an excellent write. Good luck for the competition.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/18/2013 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kim, thank goodness for versatile titles to my poems lol ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 5:26:00 AM
    Wow, you have amazed me by the immensity of your talents by producing such a grand poem such as this my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful write here this morning! What a glorious piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!