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Below is the poem entitled morning which was written by poet scott thirtyseven. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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morning

MORNING

Good morning World.

Damn you!
and your warm
sunray fingers
prying open my eyes.

Robbing me of my
nocturnal fantasies,
my semiconscious bliss.

Leaving the remnants
of my peace 
and tranquillity
laying scattered across
my face and through
my hair.

Your rising light
shrinking the shadows
of my freedom.

I will not be seduced
by your clear blue promises.

For your pressing realities
already taste foul
in my mouth.

Leave me Morning
to my diminishing serenity.


I have performed this piece and it shows on you tube (I hope this works, if not try copying to your address bar):
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=egYjy4Iu5e8&feature=youtu.be
enjoy

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  1. Date: 3/23/2014 7:04:00 PM
    when I saw this one before, I had seen it thru the link. Now I see it was your first poem posted here. So far my favorite too of all your poems (oh and the pee poem of course). So you are living down under? You lucky duck!!

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 3/23/2014 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh and I trust you enjoyed the video, a lot of fun to make. Thanks for the feedback.
    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 3/23/2014 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I absolutely started my Soup life with one of my best. Yes currently I live in New Zealand (oh and this place is beautiful), but as my wife reminded me today, in two weeks I will be living back home in Australia. Change is coming...
  1. Date: 3/23/2014 11:00:00 AM
    I love this one too, looking through your "best poems" did you know Soup has assigned us lists of our best poems? It's such a cool feature. I too despise the morning. but lately I have not been able to sleep past 7 no matter what time I go to bed the night before.

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 3:12:00 PM
    Scott, intense work, a very different wake up, enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 5:09:00 PM
    Scott Such a great write for everybody who despises mornings. And there's a lot of them. LOL Nicely done. Thanks for the great comment on my Revenge poem.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 5:43:00 PM
    I am not a morning person, either! Great expression in this piece, Scott! I really enjoyed the read! Very well done!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 7:33:00 AM
    Watched the video. Great job. You have a lovely voice for poetry and it was nice to see it all acted out. You should do some more like that! Very effective. -and a very cute piece. (: Always, Laura

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 11/15/2013 4:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for watching the video. It was fun to make, and to watch. I am working on "Where the City Folk Live" at the moment. Hopefully it won't be too far. Would like to encourage all poets to make clips for their work.
  1. Date: 11/11/2013 1:19:00 AM
    Sweet!Will watch the video RIGHT NOW.Hehe. Love your style. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 2:18:00 AM
    Brilliant!

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 9:10:00 PM
    An interesting write, I too appreciate the peaceful sleep, enjoyed your verse xxx

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 5:43:00 AM
    about your poem, I so so love it... a good morning to the world. .. I'm not one who wakes up in bitter moods. but the foul taste is understanding :-) ... now write a poem called Night, and intrigue me again. ..luv luv linda

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 5:39:00 AM
    hi Scott, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 8:18:00 PM
    And good morning to you Scott, my friend, this was another piece of superior quality. I'll surely be reading more of your poems, keep writing, my friend, you are good...Peter

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your work..Something is wrong with the address that you gave..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 8/30/2013 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your attempt to watch this piece. I have also posted this poem in "High Critique", where the link to you-tube is much easier. I'm glad you enjoyed the written version, and again thanks for taking the time.
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 1:10:00 AM
    not a morning person huh? Nice write

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 8/25/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    If only the day would start when we were ready for it to.
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 6:19:00 AM
    A very well written unique write that sums up how most of us feel in the mornings :) A warm welcome to the soup! Hugs

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 8/22/2013 12:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 4:24:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Scott ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 8/22/2013 12:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your encouraging words.
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:38:00 PM
    Hey Scott, don't we all feel that way some mornings? You expressed it well and I enjoyed reading it. Allan

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 8/22/2013 12:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, it was such a fun write.
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 2:43:00 AM
    Nice work and oh so true...

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 8/22/2013 12:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Did you get a look on you tube? I've also put this on "high critique" where the you tube link is really easy. For your own poem you may like to try it.
  1. Date: 8/16/2013 6:44:00 PM
    this is a great MONDAY read! Will be certain to watch it, too!

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 8/16/2013 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope the vid does not disappoint.