Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/16/2013 12:14:00 PM
    This is a beautiful poem...The story seems so real. If this is true my friend you must hold on a little longer. You must continue the race and stay in the fight. Life is not a bed of roses, but you will be a winner when you learn to face it. You have won many why do you have to give up the fight. Hold on a little's longer and share your story with the Father.

    Phillips Avatar Christine Phillips
    Date: 8/16/2013 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for visiting my work. but that is far from anger. Please reread and dig deep and you will understand what the poem is really saying. You may want to update those comments. Thank you christine
    Stucz Avatar Arnold Stucz
    Date: 8/16/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    if feelings are not real then they are fake, fake feelings don't last long but real feelings last forever. thank you.