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Out of water

Your all I ever wanted,
you just weren't one to give.
You had control, 
dug me my own little hole.
All the weight on my shoulder,
you never wanting to leave her.
Memories starting to blur,
an ongoing deception.
My mind and heart begging for freedom,
never stepping foot out the masters kingdom.
An absolute dark cloud follows my every move,
sure enough I have alot to prove.

Never really tried to leave my ruins,
but as I fall deep into the steep basins,
and breath my last breath.
I foresee a shibboleth.
What was the hardest thing in the world,
I jumped through and undid the burled.
Life's not ready for me,
and plenty would agree.
I'm one person ready for the hurt,
cause nothing and nobody can make me feel like dirt.

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  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:21:00 PM
    well my dear, you are amazing with or without poetry. I like the line, *Never really tried to leave my ruins,.. and the ending and first line,,, the poem is deep and cuts deep. By the way I hat3 the man who made you feel like this... always... <3 <3 <3 xox