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BLOOMING

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BLOOMING






* the watchful eyes of full moon flickers again, * an alchemy of cicada nights humming a mantra like a pastoral symphony -- -as if in a twirl of primal energy --- flock of herons, band of cattle, and grasses invite smokey dusk to recite her fables on morning dew and twilight passages chant after chant * and the trees bloom of a thousand foliage gracing the winds with such opulent swagger, that the living—absent from babbling language — sigh after sigh abandon its own movements to drift on greenery floating on anklet of sky hardly recognized , except for this rare instance: the dignity of darkness, the tiers of fragrance, and caresses of nocturnal beings gathering in warm oneness of silence, reverent as it were, upon • dew soaked in buoyant wonder..* the mind forgets to speak: the branches of a landscape pivot never knowing why in solace, the breath marries light II circle II after II circle. II ^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Creative Layouts Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings 8/11/2013

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:50:00 PM

    I also liked the little stars and the one dot. Cute! :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:49:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win! :) G.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:46:00 PM

    awesome win...PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 1:05:00 PM

    Congrats on your creative and unique winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 2:52:00 PM

    hi Nette congrats on your great win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:10:00 PM

    Love how you made it a tree, Nette. Now THAT 's creativity. Congrats on another well deserved win.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:45:00 PM

    Nette, , Congratulations on your awesome win....................... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:49:00 PM

    what a beautiful write and lovely tree... congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 12:25:00 AM

    nette I'm naduduling na trying to figure out the creature in your poem. I am using my 3 d vision too! I see a cookie jar!! Good luck on the contest. And, yes the layout is really creative. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:35:00 PM

    This is traditionally known as a shape poem but it is accurately described as a concrete poem.With that being said,your imagery here is richly seasoned into a grand portrait.

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:53:00 AM

    Wonderful design and write,Nette..Nice work....XOXO...

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:38:00 PM

    Your tree construction of a poem was very impressive. Beautiful and attentive work nette. Congratulations. :) G.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 12:22:00 PM

    Poet and artist! Wow....I'm impressed....you are special nette.....:-)

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 9:57:00 AM

    Hi, my dear friend Nette! So excited for the coming show! Hope I can listen here. I'll try my best. Well, I wish you good luck my dearest friend. I know you can dot it. About your poem, giving you two thumbs up again for this amazing & outstanding write and form. So love it! The humming of the cicada gives me nostalgic mem'ries at home. Thank you so much for sharing. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 9:21:00 AM

    Loved your imagery and how it developed.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:53:00 AM

    Flamboyant work..You've got the style..Enjoyed reading this morn..I am doing okay..It is still raining here and it was very nice and cool this morning..Thanks for stopping by..Your visits are always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 11:47:00 PM

    Exceptional poem n i like how u say d cicada sypmphony! Wow great freeverse.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 8/30/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Peter!
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 9:54:00 PM

    You have enhanced the beauty of nature just by this enlightening write my friend! I believe you have brought wonderment by the splendor of this gorgeous poem! I really enjoyed reading this astounding piece Nette! What a tremendous poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 8:01:00 PM

    Very nice Nette, is this for a contest?? had fun reading...LINDA

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:35:00 PM

    So cool Nette, I like your tree very much.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 4:46:00 PM

    Great write, great pattern and fantastic words, what more can I say...Thank you Nette...peter

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 3:20:00 PM

    YOur poem's shape resembles a tree, Nette. which is great since trees appear in the middle of your gorgeous poem!

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:38:00 PM

    Wow, this is awesome, how'd you do that?? and the word are beautiful as always.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:01:00 PM

    and the trees bloom of a thousand foliage~I fell in love with this verse..in serenity with the silence and fragrant sighs of the night.. This is beautiful..transmits warmth..My mind forgets to speak as i watch you blooming through.verse..One of my favourite poets here . Happy weekend dear..Enjoy it to.the full B-)

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 1:24:00 PM

    beautiful, as always. The third stanza is my favorite... Jack

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 11:29:00 AM

    - Nature's symphony .... beautiful, Nette! - Have a great Thursday! - It's almost weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise (.... no more ice cream for you :)

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 10:49:00 AM

    "A pastoral symphony", damn. This is just gorgeous. Your soul blossoms proud in this writing. Just beautiful.