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Her chest heaves in slow-burn motion like pain etched on her clamped spine... and deep into a night sighing death's nearness, brows mark a skull tattooed upon mementos, while lungs attempt to wake frail twilight. And petals of long hair, unruly as ever glide along her desire to roam through a woodland of avant-garde trails, sampling her rebellious womanhood with grit and reserve... a mural of splattered coatings bearing puebla clothes and beads pitched on the nail of passion, of iced distance, choosing instead to taste the remaining sips of a Latin dance, clinging unto mist that can not restore a flamed glow. The skull resting on her head, does it weep for the finale of a once beguiled life; romancing lusty tracks of her exalted journey ? Woman! Though in the grey of fleeting hours ; she still rises to touch the moon, to inhale bloated fruits and leaves ...how dauntless! When morning crawls, she lives again for pleasure before bones of age and soil melt her fragrance. .................... Dr. Ram Mehta's Missed Poem Frida Kahlo in Free Verse Contest Sponsor: Cyndi Mac Millan by: nette onclaud *Painting: Kahlo's ' Thinking of Dying' --Clinging Unto Grey Fire (poem title) http://www.fridakahlofans.com/paintingsyear05.htm

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  1. Date: 3/14/2014 12:49:00 PM
    congrats in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 12:26:00 AM
    Nette this is wonderful! Congrats on well deserved win !

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 4:39:00 PM
    I am a boy making macaroni and cheese in the microwave, thinking I know how to make a dinner. Then Boom! I met a Chef and tasted her savory delights, and now I understand.. I know nothing!

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 3:34:00 PM
    I am in awe ........ Congrats with this VICTORY you did NOT miss. Dutch Greetings Elly

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 11:14:00 AM
    Such a beautiful poem Nette, You write so well. Congrats on your fine win....l..Hugs....Roger

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 10:15:00 AM
    Nice written... " before bones of age and soil melt her fragrance. " it's super....Best wishes from India....

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 7:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win.... Verlena

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 7:57:00 AM
    Oh Nette, such a pity you didn't get to enter it the first time around, but you were meant to enjoy the glory this time, congrats on your great win luv, your always a delight to my soul luv ya xxx

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 7:47:00 AM
    an exceptional write!! ..Congratulations, nette!!! ..=D

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 6:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on a fine win in my contest and thanks for the participation, nette

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Overwhelming free verse. It impressed me and made me worry. Is everything fine? G. ?

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 11:31:00 AM
    How can anyone top this portrayal.....you have such a gift, and I cannot wait to listen to you read on Drake's program.. Wow, Nette....this is excellent!

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    Date: 3/12/2014 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What is Drake's program and when Carrie?
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Damn but that's good! Jack

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:03:00 AM
    Excellent. Very creative write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 11:54:00 PM
    What a great opening line... and was a great line to end with Nette!!! Very great poem I loved it!!! from your new fan and fellow poet! Christopher Boskovski :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 11:00:00 PM
    With your poetry you turn the world into an especially fabulous place, one at which many people love here on this earth! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, Quite the magnificent poem my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:43:00 PM
    You make words come to life in this write Nette, I keep coming back for more, you are endless my dear, good night and sweet dreams xxx

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:33:00 PM
    The whole thing just dances, moves and sings...perfection....

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 2:50:00 PM
    WHAT a great way to portray her. I am sure this must be that famous Mexican artist. Did you ever see the movie about her? She was incredible. I know this poem will do really well in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 12:29:00 PM
    - Thank you ... this is beautiful, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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