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The cloak

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The cloak

Light Leaves, Darkness is
Feeling, loneliness, dwelling
In the eyes of night 

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 1:38:00 PM

    hey Laura, a deep look into the eyes, of the dark... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:47:00 PM

    An excellent haiku Laura. love phyl

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:21:00 PM

    A very well written haiku with each line gives more power to the next one. Very well written ...

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 2:37:00 PM

    wow, that last line is a doozie!! Good one.

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 11:51:00 AM

    Excellent haiku.

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:58:00 AM

    Very emotionally fierce lines. The battle between night & day. Deep stuff!