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Dandelion Dream

-Dandelion Dream-

I stand close with a fistful of flowers
My tiny bouquet made of dandelion dreams 
They fade with one gush from the wind
I stand close with a fistful of flowers
Holding on tight to jagged leaves 
Sprinkles of sand fall over my needs
I stand close with a fistful of flowers
My tiny bouquet made of dandelion dreams 

~SKAT~


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  1. Date: 4/8/2014 1:32:00 AM

    Hi SKAT. I like this poem; the theme, the imagery. Nicely done. Thanks for your words, ;) Mel

  1. Date: 4/7/2014 6:21:00 PM

    Aw that is awesome. I loved reading this poem it was very real and description. I look forward to reading more of your words ;)

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 8:06:00 PM

    Beautiful. You know it's good poetry when you feel better inside, almost as if you had written it yourself. I felt that gush of wind.. Do write on dear poet. ~Teresa

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 10:06:00 PM

    Humble subject, great theme! A transformation is possible only with a skillful poet. SKAT you are that. My grandson makes dandelion bouquet during the summer for his "MOM", my daughter. Thanks SKAT for dreaming dandelion!

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 10:34:00 AM

    I love the way you described those dreams as dandelions blown with the wind..Very beautifully described..Dreams go and others come..just like Spring flowers..Lovely.

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 11:24:00 AM

    Hi Skat, I think this poem has such expression and imagination...Thank you, for sharing...You have quite a gift and a way of sharing how you feel on the inside...I just want to thank you, for being the first to welcome me when I started here on Poetry Soup...It was an encouragement to me, Skat :~) A friend, Cinda

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 12:27:00 AM

    I really enjoyed, "Dandelion Dreams".

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 2:14:00 PM

    Such beautiful imagery you create with words. Just marvelous! Thanks also for commenting on my poem #LegacyOfErrors

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 11:50:00 AM

    enjoyed very much I hope they grow into many sweet dreams

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 4:00:00 PM

    Lovely comparison of the fragility of dreams to that of a dandelion in the wind.

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 9:31:00 AM

    Dandelions just became a favourite flower. Lovely dreams you have. Those leaves taste beautiful too. Enjoyed my visit . Thanks I will call again.

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 3:54:00 PM

    Im not too familiar with this style but i like what you wrote here.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 4:28:00 PM

    Triolet is a beautiful form. So simple yet so complex. Makes me smile. Well done :)

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 11:52:00 PM

    that's really sweet dream perhaps !!

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 1:59:00 AM

    Hi my dearest sis Skat! I'm stopping by to read & enjoy once again this very beautiful triolet poem of yours. Thank you so much for sharing! And since our New Year countdown is about to start here, I'm greeting you & your family now a Very Happy New Year 2014! I wish you all the best in Health, Happiness, Love, Peace, Prosperity and Success! lovemuch your poet sis & friend Leo

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 3:09:00 PM

    Superb!

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 1:52:00 PM

    Oh skat what a lovely moment you have made here (hold on I'm going back to read it again) Yes it is lovely. I wondered how the sand got in there but I liked it a lot. I have lots of dandelions, I collect them, I keep them in my lawn.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 7:49:00 PM

    Hi Skat. Just stopping by to say Happy Thanksgiving or at least happy Thursday, depending on what you do for the occasion. I had never heard of a triolet before (you all have a lot to teach me), but to me it's almost Oriental in its flavor, very succinct. It's a sad time (sprinkles of sand fall over my needs... my tiny bouquet made of dandelion dreams), but what a great way to express a mood. Well done!

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 12:20:00 AM

    Delicious poem. Dandelions are my favourite flowers. Thanks for sharing. JM

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 4:08:00 PM

    Very nice poem makes one reflect on bygone days in the fields close to home. Dandelions were always a fleeting thrill to set adrift on the wind. :) Foxie

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 2:27:00 PM

    Your Beauty, Forever Brushes So Very Exquisitely ~ Easy, To Stand In Awe As Fall In Love, With These Hands Whom Guide Such Strokes, Pure, Be Her Splendours ~ My Love, Always, John

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 1:02:00 PM

    aww its sweet :) I like it.

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 12:35:00 AM

    what can i say? writing is in you.... SKAT - LOVE

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 9:23:00 AM

    thanks for your comments, and I like your new avatar.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 9:07:00 AM

    Beautifully polished piece Skat.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 4:37:00 AM

    The true poet's touch is evident in this beautiful verse..... Great writing..... Jake

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 1:12:00 AM

    "AWESOME"!!! You write Beautifully!! Glad to hear from you!!! tell your Darling Sister I miss her. I don't come here much ...just to post Off Color humor Blogs...To see if my so called friends have the BALLS...to support me..(.you too ladies! )ha ha

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 7:30:00 PM

    Beautiful imagery throughout. Such a powerful poem. I like a lot! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:01:00 AM

    Wow, very deep. Thank you for your welcome.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 8:22:00 PM

    Ok finally I meet a poet I think is Talented and writes like I like Not that there aren't many There are!! But I just saying I connected the dots..... I'm liking your poems Skat, Kind rgs Avi

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