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- I Need You -

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- I Need You -




                                         I have sweet thoughts
                                       The thoughts goes to you
                                       My tears comforted by you
                               The pleasure is great when I have you
                             The delights you give me when I'm happy
                                My eyes sparkle when I look at you
                                        My mouth runs in water
                                        I just have to taste you
                                           My own love and sin                        
                                          Only by a small touch
                                        Feel my lips cools down
                                   A sprinkling of chocolate on top
                                    My delicious vanilla ice cream
                                          I need you ... NOW!





13.08.2013
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  1. Date: 4/19/2014 10:31:00 AM
    Hi Anne-Lise,another fine write from your golden pen. I was taken In most definitely, getting ready for a gently sensual write, not expecting It to turn out to be Ice Cream. Loved It. I really do have to get some control though, I just want to head Into the kitchen. I'm sure I have some Ice cream In the freezer, just got more strawberries today. I am off into the kitchen to get my Love fix. Really enjoyed this one. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/19/2014 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - A poem that fits for you and me ..... (ice cream love :))) - Thanks for your visit and your comments my friend Mike, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/15/2014 6:30:00 AM
    Anne its very sweet of you. The way tou turned after sixth line is superb... !! 'I need you ... NOW!'--is really real... I enjoyed it from the begining to end. :))

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/15/2014 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Archana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:47:00 AM
    The element of surprise is always a winner!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/20/2013 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the visit and comments,Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:50:00 PM
    OMGoodness Anne you sooo had me going in the wrong direction lol.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/12/2013 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the visit and comments,F.J.. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Wow! Exposing the feeling buried within every soul

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/4/2013 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the visit and comments, Wilfred. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:12:00 AM
    A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/30/2013 5:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the visit and comments, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:35:00 AM
    Rhetorical! I liked it.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/29/2013 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Remelan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:37:00 AM
    It's when you melt down/ That i start/ This flow is sure an art/ The designs it weaves/ These eyes' in for a treat/ The ice cream was just/ A passing part/

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/24/2013 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Vijay, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:25:00 PM
    Mmmm sounds yummy and sexy the same time. I want some of that. LOL Nicely written Anne Lise. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/21/2013 3:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Phyllis, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 2:09:00 AM
    Now I want some Vanilla. Sweet.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/20/2013 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Alozor Michael, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 11:28:00 AM
    Yummy!!! can I have it? I think I need it also :) thanks for this very delicious poem of yours friend Anne. Very creative. Have a great day always. Hugs, :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/19/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Maria, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/16/2013 10:42:00 AM
    mmmmmmm----------delicious in every way....in metaphor or reality.....I love it!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/16/2013 10:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Carrie, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/16/2013 6:49:00 AM
    It nice to know that you have cherished these wonderful feelings. They are evident in your writings. Life is not all well and rosy for others...I live in a realistic world and observed and experience daily happenings. I always enjoy reading your love poems. If that's what's keep you glowing...keep shining my dear.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/16/2013 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Even if the world is not a happy and rosy ..... I like to be "happy" in my poems - Spread joy and forget the sorrow ...- Thanks for your visit and your comments Christine, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Ohhh... your words make my mouth water for ice cream and... for you ;-) A poem of longing... wonderful... Terry (and thank you, Anne Lise, for your kind comments)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/16/2013 1:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Terry, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 3:49:00 PM
    I love this one both front and backwards, it flows perfectly...a playful yet romantic poem...I suddenly want ice-cream :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/16/2013 1:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Sandra, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:47:00 PM
    very cute and romantic passion play!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/16/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Andrea, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 1:13:00 PM
    i'll have cookies and cream ice-cream for friday, anne.... i NEED to.. happy day and thanks for coming around...:) huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/16/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Nette, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Ahh a Great passion poem...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/15/2013 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Carol, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 11:46:00 AM
    'Enjoyed reading this poem,its interesting and delightful to read..good work ann'

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/15/2013 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Priyanka, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 11:27:00 AM
    You have beautifully revealed in this passionate write the feelings of a carving body and mind, more so as you have given a flavor of ice-cream and chocolate also. Sweet Poem Anne on the need of Love and its feelings. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra…Anne L A

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/15/2013 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Ravindra, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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