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Bittersweet Solitude part 3

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Bittersweet Solitude part 3

I feel so damn trapped in my solitary cave 
I believe that you'll remain strong all throughout our hardships
I believe that you could run the extra mile...just keep your pace and never give up no matter what happens
You'll reach the finish line in no time...do it with all of your might 
And soon, you'll discover that light
But for now, we're blanketed with darkness in this mysterious cave
Be brave... You can do anything if you put your mind to it ...try your best and never be brought low by discouragement 
Some people will test your determination or push your buttons...
But keep on running!! 
Keep your pace and put forth tons of effort...think of the victory and the thought of success
I bet you'd feel accomplished... I wish I could be in your shoes just for this terrific event 
Help me stay on track...trample away my fears
Remind me not to look back...I feel lost and scared - scrub away my tears and fill my heart with cheers
I've kept those tears in for many years 
Help me have an open and prudent mind, so I can accept your cheers and the truth 
That has been concealed forever it seems
I need sleep - let me rest and wish me sweet dreams
Or I'll be breaking by the seams

I hope you find a place you call your haven
If I were an angel, I'd guide you to your destiny and hand you the right directions
To make you truly understand that I love you dearly
Could I run with you? How far are you willing to go?
Are you running the extra mile? Am I slowing you down?
It was hard to admit the fact that I loved you
And still do to this day
Should I confess my feelings towards you?
Would it open new doors for me or would it gain disappointed? Hopefully the doors won't close for the sake of my life
Should I trust you with my life?
Why does it feel so good to think about you?
My heart's yearning for love again

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  1. Date: 8/12/2013 11:27:00 PM
    Give and you shall receive... You hold the key to your own success.