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Love - reverse contest

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Love - reverse contest

Love in reverse?


She had lain
Hair like a halo
About her pillow
Had awaited her lover
Pleasing  her soul
Kissing and nibbling
Crying out in passion
Now, yes now,
Bodies entwined
Swaying to lovers music
Sensually to the beat of the heart
With crescendo's of release. 
Immortal endless love
Complete


Reverse Contest - read it backwards as well
Penned  11 August 2013

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  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:37:00 PM
    Very well done, loved this one!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/18/2013 12:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. Seren
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 3:28:00 PM
    Great job, there Seren, it was a great read both backwards and forwards..well done....Peter

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Seren, I really like this, but I feel like I must be getting it all wrong. I was trying to read it from the very final word and go all the way backwards word by word instead of line by line. I need to find out what he means. If we can do it backward by LINES, it won't be nearly as difficult as I imagined!! GOOD job.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/12/2013 4:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you can read it line by line backwards and it makes sense mostly(lol)
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/12/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    awww dont say that i did it line by line. dont fancy re-writing it. let me know what you find out.please...Seren
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 11:04:00 AM
    This is a beautiful and wonderful write here my friend! I truly loved reading this harmonious poem this afternoon! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/12/2013 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thsnks Russell, hlad you enjoyed it ....Seren