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My Journey on Poetrysoup

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Below is the poem entitled My Journey on Poetrysoup which was written by poet Shanity Rain. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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My Journey on Poetrysoup

Number one or ten ,  is such a compliment 
amongst all of this passion lies such talent 
I thank-you through my heart and am humbled you read my thoughts
In this happy home of humility I find peace. In my journey in, a web of desire I am caught

I see myself broken as I try and become
a person that  heals, can survive , one who can overcome 

You can tell I have been through Life and all it offers 
through tears I have cried , my soul will heal , beat stronger 
sadness , love , happiness , fearless , all to  be written , and edited often .
In words , in rhymes, through joyful design,  I easily loose time 

Thank you to all my fellow poets out there ,  you share the desire to put on paper .
You are on your way up in this journey, living life free to feel  , honest colors lie true .
This way of writing , expressing your thoughts , can hold no despair .  
 
I write and record the events as they have happened
Many years ago , I believe the art and poets gave us a vision of the past
in life , in pain , in journey , just write , write all the same , it is words that shall last

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  1. Date: 9/7/2013 2:04:00 PM

    hi Yvette!(its always nice to meet someone who shares the same name with you& loves writing!!) this is the Soupers anthem for sure!! also love your piece called a writers soul :) -Y.L Ndlovu

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 9/9/2013 3:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well Merci Mon Amie ! Yes , I love the Soup , and this site allowed me and still does to think , create , learn , amazing site !! So much more productive then "Facebook " this has meaning in a way I can't put words to. Your Name is beautiful, as is your eyes ! Love my friend , Yvette
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 8:11:00 PM

    A poetic anthem to us Soupers, very good, and who better to write it than our No. 1... MC

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/14/2013 10:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    how do you find the time my friend ;) TY !
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 3:29:00 PM

    "It is the words that last"... so very true, my dear Yvette and a very well written poem about the joy of being a part of Poetry Soup! I enjoyed reading it... big warm hugs xoxoxxo

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/11/2013 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    very warm hugs back !
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:40:00 PM

    This is a beauty Yvette, enjoyed reading it tonight ;)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/11/2013 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you my friend ;)
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 12:31:00 PM

    A good tribute to the members of poetry soup....Thank you kelley.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/11/2013 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you all , you are all amazing people .
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 11:46:00 AM

    - Agree with you Yvette, beautifully written - Have a enjoyable Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/11/2013 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you sweet girl , may you have a blessed rain kissed day !
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Beautiful....and oh so true! Thanks for sharing these profound thoughts....

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/11/2013 11:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you , For I just found your poems ! WOW ! I read the 1st and was stunned , now I am off to work , time flies when you write , when you have fun !