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Haiku Days

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Haiku Days

	
	
	
	Haiku Days
	
	
	Haiku mornings 
		coffee 
		and my computer 	
		and quiet in the house.
	
	Haiku nights 
		red wine
		and my computer
		and quiet in the house.
	
	My small world in seventeen syllables
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 1:18:00 AM
    Stopping by for old time's sake... Jack, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/27/2013 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Linda, A happy Thanksgiving to you as well. Your words are very kind. As I've said before, your support for my meager writing has been there since day-one, and I've appreciated it immensely. I enjoy your always good, sometimes wicked humor, not to mention your skill with words, which I very much admire. You're a good person to know... Jack
  1. Date: 8/16/2013 9:00:00 AM
    syllables --not line...

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:55:00 AM
    Good morning Jack, this is a fascinating way in sharing your day's and night in just 17 lines. Amazing it is.. I wonder what my haiku day's and night would sound like... This would make a great idea for a contest.... enjoyed... Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/16/2013 9:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Why don't you give it a try. Just for fun, you might look at http://roadrunnerhaikublog.files.wordpress.com/2013/08/rr-13-2.pdf. Scroll down to one beginning "Moist clods."
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Hi Jack....enjoyed your poem...sometimes I wish I had more time to be online...but then again I'm glad I'm still able to and have lots and lots of things to keep me busy and active. Love your new picture!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/12/2013 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's good to hear from you, and that life seems to be going well for you. I thought it was time to not look so gruff... Jack
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 4:22:00 PM
    I like my coffee in the mornings, but the wine should taste great at night, but not if you have to drink it alone. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 12:40:00 PM
    I salute you, your PC and your home. Nice first read. G.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/11/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Giorgio... Jack