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Apocalypse Risen

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Apocalypse Risen

Moon light impotent Stables darkness impenetrable For only the horseman may enter Those without souls do find their way World will end by hand of few men Those incompetent of compassion and caring The ones who look out only for their heir While suffering and strife consume A time will come when the mass will form Breaking the barriers, seemingly impervious Where all may have what they do need Water, love, home and seed Until such time, which may never appear Stables darkness will remain Its halls quite For the four horses are being ridden today

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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:34:00 AM

    awesome win ~SKAT~

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/12/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks SKAT :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 12:34:00 PM

    A fine winning poem. congratulations. Favorite line "The ones who look out only for their heir While suffering and strife consume "..all completely stunning verses :)

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/7/2013 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much. It just frustrates me that those who have plenty want more and more while whining that they need to help thy neighbor.
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:26:00 AM

    Adam: Congratulations on your win. G

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/6/2013 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thansk G.
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:03:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Morgan

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/6/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Danesh.
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 7:38:00 PM

    great poem! I can see why it is in the winner's circle...congrats on your win :)

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/6/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sandra glad you liked it.
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Congratulations on a coving piece.

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/6/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard.
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:10:00 PM

    Adam, well done...congrats...PD

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/6/2013 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD :)
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 12:54:00 PM

    Great scary winning work..Enjoyed reading your winner..Congrats..Sara

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/5/2013 1:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara, congrats to you as well :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 10:04:00 AM

    We have seen the 4 horsemen in every millennium yet somehow we prevail. Darkness hides the rays of the sun but morning comes every 24 hours. Allan

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/6/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very true. Thanks Allan.
    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 9/5/2013 8:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great comment, Allan, for a great poem.
  1. Date: 8/9/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Intriguing! Deep.

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth Date: 9/6/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you liked it Gerald.