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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 8/15/2013 4:49:00 AM
    Excellent. The spiritual content is beautifully said. Tfs

    Newman Avatar Sue-Ellen Newman
    Date: 8/18/2013 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, this was my first attempt at this form, glad you liked it, have a blessed day, sueellen
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 12:50:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work..Without the Savior, my life would lack flavor and favor..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara

    Newman Avatar Sue-Ellen Newman
    Date: 8/14/2013 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading for me, yes I am nothing without HIM in my life, blessing sueellen
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:09:00 PM
    Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

    Newman Avatar Sue-Ellen Newman
    Date: 8/12/2013 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucilla, glad you liked it, this is my first attempted at this form, so I hope it is true to form and count, blessings sueellen
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:10:00 AM
    soulful in a form that needs substance in just a few lines, sue... heavenly words!..:) hugggs

    Newman Avatar Sue-Ellen Newman
    Date: 8/12/2013 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you nette, writing about our GOD made my first attempted at this poetry form easy for GOD is the poetry in me, have a blessed day, sueellen
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 8:26:00 AM
    A very nice poem in a very tough format...however the message is the story here and that was superb!!! MC

    Newman Avatar Sue-Ellen Newman
    Date: 8/12/2013 6:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Marquis, glad you liked it, my first attempted t this poetry form, enjoyed doing it , have a blessed day, sueellen
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 8:11:00 AM
    cinquain Lovely form. you have done it very well. I am new to the form. should give it a try. Good flow . Bless you dearest.! Thanks for your visit on my poems, Hugs and love manel

    Newman Avatar Sue-Ellen Newman
    Date: 8/12/2013 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mabel, I too am new to a Cinquain , this is my first attempted at this form, glad you liked it, blessings sueellen
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Excellent job sue-ellen,,I know they are , harder than they look like richard said. The spiritual content is beautiful:) ty4sharing <3 cherie...

    Newman Avatar Sue-Ellen Newman
    Date: 8/12/2013 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Cherie, glad you liked it my first attempt at this poetry style, blessings sueellen
  1. Date: 8/10/2013 11:50:00 PM
    Excellent traditional Cinquin. They are much harder than they look but you made it look easy.

    Newman Avatar Sue-Ellen Newman
    Date: 8/12/2013 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard, this was my first attempted at a Cinquain , so I am glad you liked it, blessings sueellen
  1. Date: 8/10/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Nice cinquain about prophet Jesus.

    Newman Avatar Sue-Ellen Newman
    Date: 8/12/2013 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by to read for me, blessings sueellen