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A Fairy's Fantasy

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A Fairy's Fantasy

Somewhere deep in these enchanted woods
a fairy is perched upon a delicate daisy
she yawns and stretches her transparent wings
as all around her in the dim purple glow of twilight
the fireflies shine and dance 
with the butterflies as they fly away to hide until dawn
the frogs and the crickets prepare for their midnight symphony
a majestic unicorn approaches the stream to drink from the cool waters.

The fairy now rests on this delicate daisy
gazing up at the darkening purple sky
filled with misty stars that twinkle like diamonds
through the tree branches she can just see
a perfect crescent moon looking down on her
as she drifts off to sleep
this fairy lives in a fantasy world
so, what wondurous thing can she possibly dream about?

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  1. Date: 3/31/2014 3:49:00 AM
    weeeee... sure i love it.. :D mmmn.. :D probably if someone recites this to me and ill just close my eyes... i feel like am there.. :D

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 3/31/2014 11:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by to read this poem of mine. I'm so happy that you did enjoy it, Olive! :)
  1. Date: 3/30/2014 4:01:00 PM
    Kelly, you are earning amazing kudos here from your follow writers.. All well deserved. You are a serious and gifted poem with great imagination. Congrats!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 3/31/2014 11:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your kind words, Dave. I am a very humble person and I never expect to receive comments like these. But, I'm very grateful that I do!
  1. Date: 3/30/2014 2:59:00 AM
    Now you've got me curious about what she COULD be dreaming about! This poem is so very enchanting and captivating Kelly...Congratulations are DEFINITLY in order - Tim

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 3/31/2014 11:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Tim! I really do appreciate your kind words. Glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
  1. Date: 3/29/2014 3:50:00 PM
    Fantasies and great imagery...love it:) congrats. // paul

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 3/31/2014 12:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Paul. I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem! :)
  1. Date: 3/29/2014 11:25:00 AM
    Hi, Congrats on your worthy win Kelly. Loved the imagery and the unique addition of a unicorn. Well done. Regards Theresa xx

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 3/30/2014 1:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Theresa, Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! I think it is fun to write about fantasy creatures like unicorns, fairies, mermaids and dragons, and bring them to life. :)
  1. Date: 3/29/2014 5:35:00 AM
    Well constructed and penned poem. Congrats on a fine win, kelly

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 3/30/2014 12:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the kind comments, Dr. Ram!
  1. Date: 3/29/2014 1:12:00 AM
    Kelly, Congratulations! Thank you for the support. Enjoy my latest blog if you like. It's called "Lunatics On The Loose." Stay tuned, I'll have a new contest coming up in a few days. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 3/30/2014 12:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Linda! And, you are very welcome. I look forward to your next contest!...I will be posting the winners of my contest on Monday, and then I will be getting a new one started. :)
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, I really enjoyed this one. You come into the world of the Dark Man, anything of a mythological bent is right up his street. Your pictures were painted with a gentle sublimity, as this was about a fairy, the style just fell right in to place. Using the free verse form would give you much more scope in the fantasy world. The very first line, "Somewhere deep in these enchanted woods," and i felt like a child again. I really enjoyed the way you wrote this one also. Your Friend....MIKE.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 12/18/2013 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for the comments, Mike! That is one of the great things about poetry. We can write and escape into a fantasy world, and forget about our everyday lives for a little while.
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:37:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, , nice Fairy Dust, winning poem........... love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 8:59:00 PM
    A sweet read, a big congrats. BG

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 4:02:00 PM
    Kelly wonderful imagery and flowing tale congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 11:40:00 AM
    Congrad's on your verse winning! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 11:38:00 AM
    Certainly not reality dear Kelly, I'd rather have one hundred sparkling castles in the air, then one dilapidated one on earth, oh that just the dreamer talking, congrats my dear, it's a beaut, xxx

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:54:00 AM
    Kelly, congrats in nate's fairy contest... LINDA

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 10:32:00 PM
    congrats.nate

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 10:10:00 AM
    The beginning of a talent-filled beautiful portfolio. You had my attention with the first line. You're some great poetess.... you've been on my fav list for some time.. Jake

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:12:00 PM
    I see you've received quite a warm welcome Kelly and I add to it by saying stunning piece! Keep them pouring out like fine wine my friend. See you around.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:42:00 AM
    IN THE CRESCENT OF THE MOON I WHISTLE BEAUTIFUL PIECE

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 10:32:00 PM
    An extremely wonderful poem, that actually put me in the scene drinking in the beauty you painted with your words, I loved it Kelly, and enjoyed every word....Peter

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 5:43:00 PM
    Read this one through three times, and each time it got better. (it takes me that long to see all the wonderful surroundings properly.) I conclude that this is a very good poem and an excellent ending. Thoughts simply cannot stop at the end of the poem. The descriptions are all very pretty. In all, it is so good I can't readily see anything to improve upon.

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