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It's The End Either Way

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It's The End Either Way

 
Beg me to forgive you, maybe I won’t
Marvel in my ability to see you how you are
I’m content in myself
I see a hopeless romantic, trapped in emotions bound with passion
The good are last -always
They are supposed to die young, but they can live to be last as well
It’s the end either way
It’s terrible to have never loved, this is true,
but a life time of losing in love…..?
You hand me another
Beg me and maybe I won’t
Whose heart is on the line here?
I’m struggling, desperate not to lose again
Make me fit inside your heart, I will stay there
Give me feelings and I will feel them,
my lines and I will read them
But I am made to see the romantic still trapped and still hopeless
You’re sorry and you’re forgiven,
but the cracks have still been inflicted
To go young or to be last?
Last…..,
though it’s the end either way

Written in Texas -1 APR 2013

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 12:28:00 AM
    GREAT WRITE UP

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 1:41:00 PM
    I think you should be published ..this is very good. MC ..I am serious.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:01:00 AM
    As humans we do have a tendency to repeat our patterns. Being aware of this can change our trajectory. It is good to look back.

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 8/7/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rick, great words of wisdom you left me with! MC
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Hey, thanks for the soupmail. I want to read some of the poems you mentioned in it. Can't recall if this was one you mentioned, but I can see it is dealing with your current situation.This is writing from the heart!

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 8/6/2013 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You know Andrea, this one is actually not for the me of now, this is more a tribute to the younger me. Breaking up with someone who feels so bad about making you feel bad that now you're expected to forgive them! "Whose heart is on the line here?" I can see how you thought this dealt with the current -I forgive you..but beg me and maybe I won't...LOL! Thanks! MC
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 2:03:00 AM
    Wow this is a bit of a tear jerker,,,,MC. You stirred deep emotions in each line. Amazing write,,,that's written from your heart...~<3 Cherie

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 8/6/2013 5:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, needless to say, I've been here a couple of times. So happy I was able to capture the emotions felt in a snapshot of a breakup. MC
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 1:27:00 AM
    Very strong emotive work....deep questions. Intriguing....

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 8/6/2013 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Why thank you Eileen! Question? Ask away, i'm an...open LOL! book! Thanks again! MC
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 12:22:00 AM
    Aww,so sad xxx great writing MC, excellent work xx

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 8/6/2013 5:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you my fair, fair lady...;) xxx MC