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lightning

In the grand theatre 
Opening in the Heaven,s 
Drifting across the sky, 
cloaked in darkness 

Whistling unseen voices 
Darkened within rage, 
nature's forces 
At work 
Rising wind salute 

In static 
hair raising 
Falling down the spine 
Banging drums 
Growling almighty roars 

Grumbling unforeseen forces 
Churning in its might, 
an earth shattering clap 
Applauding trees bend 
Wind blowing gale 

Lighting up dark 
Bowing to light 
In strike daylight 
Unmerciful power 

Battle in darkened clouds 
Alight candy floss 
Falling rain crystals 
In sparkling diamonds 
Lightning strikes 

As the thunder roars 
Frightening night 
Rumbling drum beats 
Upon nature's might 
You strike  
 
 

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  1. Date: 9/9/2013 10:21:00 PM

    I quake at the mere words you describe. Lightning and thunder are so glorious, as are many things in nature, whether it be a soft rose pedal, or a gigantic tree. Enjoyed reading once again, my friend. Always, Laura

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/13/2013 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU EVER SO DEEPLY AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT LINDA DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:53:00 PM

    Unique work that you have penned for the contest..Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Congrats..Sara

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/22/2013 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you deeply for the wondefully beautiful comment greatly appreciated
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:10:00 PM

    CONGRATS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~ SKAT ~

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/22/2013 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you ever so much fot the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:21:00 PM

    Hi Liam, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/22/2013 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ah thank you ever so much really so sweet of you deeply appreciated and a goodnight to you sweet dreams
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:04:00 AM

    hi Liam congrats on a fine win Shadow x smiles

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/16/2013 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    linda what have I won I am a little confused
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 12:53:00 AM

    congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/16/2013 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so kindly deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 5:38:00 PM

    Liam, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15796&PoetID=18720 Take care --- xox Linda

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/16/2013 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sorry I am confused not that good on computers I do not even know what I won like a lost puppy I thank you kindly for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 12:36:00 PM

    hi Liam and welcome to soup lovely poem to start with Shadow x smiles

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/16/2013 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you my old friend deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 10:32:00 AM

    Hello new member: Liam ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/16/2013 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you ever so much for the beautiful comments deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Good afternoon, Liam ,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/16/2013 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you kindly for such a beautiful comment a bit lost at the minute eventually ill get the hang of it
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 5:59:00 PM

    Liam, wow! this is awesome, love the image and race against nature. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 8/4/2013 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you must be shadow linda totally lost on this site how do you add photos it feels like a different planet have to get used to it thank you kindly for the beautiful welcome deeply appreciated