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carousel in roundel


The carousel round goes to circle feasts
The scent of dusk is solitude's  primrose
- beloved her stare with light shall fade in mists
- the carousel round goes. 

And the enfolding of the silence slows
forsooth advances her response sole kissed
betimes the corteges of night depose.

Disporting round trajectories persist
their merriment of altered times disclose;
- Two loving forms in raindrops dance amidst,
- the carousel round goes. 

© G. V., 08-04-2013
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roundel - Iambic pentameter

contest: "carousel in roundel"
sponsor: nette oncloud 
placement: 1st

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 2:24:00 PM

    Congratulations Giorgio, your no. 1 today, xxx

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 7:19:00 AM

    what a beauty, giorgio..congrats and do comment on my blog.. i wrote about you..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 4:12:00 AM

    Good creative winning work..Congrats.Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:02:00 PM

    Lovely lovely...love the primrose....

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:02:00 PM

    Congratulations Georgio on your 1st place win!Beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:36:00 AM

    Way to go, great win!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 11:33:00 PM

    Congrats Giorgio.....loved your poem ...Seren

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 10:52:00 PM

    Many congrats on your win. A wonderful write.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 7:22:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:45:00 PM

    Very deep Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:56:00 PM

    Big congrats to you, always well metered poetry!!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 3:28:00 PM

    way to take a ride on the merry go round challenge. I hope you catch a big score with this lilting poem. And thanks for my placement in your last contest.

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:50:00 AM

    You get my part of the Florida vote... Great entry..... Jake

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:54:00 AM

    Loved it... a good write! Thanks for sharing! Cheers from Canada!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:15:00 AM

    A fine poem. Should do well in the contest. btw, thanks for my placement in your contest. Have a nice one!!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:20:00 AM

    Wonderful write and combination of the carousal and poignant character depiction. Good luck for the competition.

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:17:00 AM

    Interesting contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 4:18:00 AM

    Thank you very much, friends! :)

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 3:41:00 AM

    Two loving forms in raindrops dance amidst- the wooden carousel rotating goes-I can picture this view Giorgio..Its an enchanting poem makes the reader travel to that place in your thought.I do love the primrose line as well..a great lot .Charma

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 2:55:00 AM

    I loved every word!great job

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 12:48:00 AM

    Love your carousel poem. Can hear the music and see it going round and round Hugs, SuZ

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 10:22:00 PM

    Mystic Rose's post...I couldn't have said it better. This is lovely... :)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 8/5/2013 12:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 4:22:00 PM

    At some point you must have had a seat on the Round Table, your poetry rocks, have a great evening, Oh Shining Knight! xxx

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 8/4/2013 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rose! :)