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  1. Date: 8/6/2013 4:52:00 AM

    This is so beautiful. I'm not familiar with the form, but this flows smoothly, and the refrain lines are seamless. A very bittersweet and lovely write. hugs ~Becca

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 4:28:00 AM

    My friend this is excellent, great write smooth, great flow, true to form, I enjoyed this poem, blessings sueellen

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 2:58:00 PM

    Nette. this is really lovely. the second one in the set seems perfect meter!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 2:06:00 PM

    It's very beautiful! Molto brava! G.

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:00:00 AM

    Amazing poetry from you!Love it!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:58:00 AM

    Nette, this is so sad yet soft and tender and thoughtful, yet excepting of these painful truths and ready to move on. Special poem!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Beautifully sad & outstanding piece this is my dearest friend Nette. You really write so well. Two thumbs up again! I love it & the form. I hope i can try this form next time. Thank you so much for sharing and for the lovely comments on my poem. I've received a message from someone & i'm passing it to you, happy happy Friendship Day! I'm so grateful & happy to have a friend like you. Hope we'll meet someday. God bless! Biggest sweet hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 3:56:00 AM

    Nette....this is very beautiful and serene and sad all rolled into one. You've done a great job on this one, my dear....

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 12:25:00 AM

    Its like love which once was and now is gone..or fading slowly.Words..pride..emotions...So much beauty in your poem..Sad yet very beautiful sweet Nette

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 11:42:00 PM

    Excellent. Beautiful and well presented. Enjoyed. Tks

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 10:57:00 PM

    Excellent piece, enjoyed a lot.Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 6:53:00 PM

    Very beautiful, again you have painted a beautiful picture for to see. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 5:08:00 PM

    A beautiful write my dear nette, but why am I not surprised! Loved it... hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 4:55:00 PM

    'Robins sigh, as though they sing her faint regret' Perfect...

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 3:59:00 PM

    I love the presentation,the flow and the beautiful words you've woven so perfectly together.It was a joy to read my friend.

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:24:00 PM

    You have completely captured me with this beautiful write my friend! I just love your way with words, like the very first few words, "Through ashen dusk," that in itself says volumes Nette! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a lovely piece, so captivating, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:15:00 PM

    This is simply beautiful. It left me feeling both serene and sad. I LOVE the descriptive way you weave your words.

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Ahh!! A bit of sadness I feel in this one..Enjoyed reading this one today..It is very well presented..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your presence is always encouraging..Sara