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love's messenger

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love's messenger


          I looked at him and I was lost for words,
those eyes so deep and dark, so penetrating;
                    he seemed able to look into my soul,
all my thoughts and all my dreams he knew.

          I was unable to look away, then he spoke,
he had the most beautiful voice, like music;
                     so calming and soothing, to my soul,
other sounds faded away and the air was electrified.

          a storm began and the wind howled loudly,
thunder boomed and rain fell in dreadful torrents;
                     my world began to spin out of control,
I was lost in a whirlwind of emotions and desires.

          I wanted to be part of him, to be his forever,
his lips were soft, strong, gentle and demanding;
                      words so sweet that I closed my eyes,
he held me and the pleasure was beyond this world.

          suddenly, I felt a change, a shift in the air,
the storm ended and calmness settled around me;
                       I knew it was over, he was not forever,
after all, just a sweet messenger in a lovely dream.

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August 3, 2013

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Written for the contest, In the Moment, Poet Destroyer

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  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Unique and creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Congats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 10:02:00 AM
    a very beautiful piece of writing I enjoyed

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 7:28:00 AM
    congrats on your win xx

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:13:00 AM
    very poignant and lovely congrats on a fine win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 12:57:00 AM
    congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 5:40:00 PM
    Hello Broken, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15796&PoetID=18720 Take care --- xox Linda

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 1:17:00 PM
    Wow, what power you have put into your words my friend! I could easily envision exactly what it was you were trying to describe here Constance! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What an astonishing piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 11:30:00 AM
    Nicely said poet. I really liked this poem poet