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The Rift

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The Rift

Through the torn surface with edges curled
I writh, through the never ending rift of light.
The torn sheath, its parchment colored white
beckons, surface fears squirm in angst unfurled.
With edges curled, adepts display the night.
I writh, diving inward laughing, almost contrite
through the never ending spiral, I am hurled.
Rifts of light on onyx night chose to reunite,
within the torn sheath a birthing infinite.
I writh, its parchment, a mere veneer, parts swirled     
colored white,as dense as night, its content bright
beckons,  bringing finer truths to all that's right,
through the torn surface with edges curled.


Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/31/13
Contest:GLIMPSES OF EPIPHANY

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 10:14:00 AM

    great poem. Congrats on your win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:42:00 AM

    the kind of imagery nette loves!! Congrats on your win, Debs. Well deserved.

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 9:34:00 PM

    what a poem.... :-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 9:07:00 PM

    congrats...PD

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 5:48:00 AM

    hi Debbie congrats on win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 12:02:00 AM

    the awareness of knwoung all wil be right amazes, debbie... what a solid, humane write.. is this rhyme?... congrats on your fine win in my contest.. do check my blog for my remarks..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:45:00 PM

    Well done and congratulations Debbie.

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:26:00 PM

    congrats on your win Debbie

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:12:00 PM

    Congratulations..

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 7:47:00 AM

    There is a lot to absorb here. I think there is to much swirling around here and it does not feel like an epiphany.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/2/2013 7:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Upon re reading I see where you are going with it because it is glimpses, it makes total sense.