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un-spoken

  passed you by, 
had never saw your face
  But something in the mind, 
couldnt be erased

A feeling that was felt, 
so unexplainable.
  You turned back and saw, 
what. the, heart was telling you.

  It wasn't a striking beauty, 
It wasn't the prettiest face.
  Just another human being, 
who's soul sang a sweet praise.

  I never heard that song before, 
but it spoke gently to me.
  It said did I touch you? 
Did you hold back a tear for me?

 Before I could reply, 
a tear had fell, to the floor.
  The feeling was deeply, unconditional, 
I didnt see it coming at all.

  The atmosphere, was filled 
with the heaviest particle of air.
  It clouded my whole being, 
but I had no fears.

  It was so familiar, 
something we both had shared,
  It went beyond spoken words, 
it was a love dyeing to be shared.

  My core was violated, 
my mind set free.  
  The presence that encompassed
Me was , another soul that was lost, 
   who just wanted to be loved.  
                   Like me...

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  1. Date: 11/24/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Like Somewhere In Time our paths have crossed or our state of mind has become one mind by living in the here and now. I love this poem. And you need glasses Cherie you are beautiful and your poetry tells me you are not just another human being. Be good to you; Michael.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 11/25/2013 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Michael. ...truly appreciate your kind words. Thanks so much means so much to me :) <3 cherie
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 12:11:00 PM
    oh yea! I can almost see and feel the meaning in the writ. I have read much of your poems, you're a true inspiration. JM

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 9/5/2013 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi jm,,,that was a beautiful comment. Really value & appreciate your kind words:) many thanks,,, Cherie...
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 7:28:00 AM
    A new twist on love at first contact. Very moving.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/6/2013 1:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Richard always appreciate your lovely comments:0)
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 10:10:00 AM
    breaking me into pieces, cherie... so woberfully crafted.. i like!..:) huggs

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/1/2013 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    awhhh sorry nette, lol,,,, im glad you liked though :) cherie~<3~
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 3:46:00 PM
    there's so much to ponder in the joining of souls. A force or energy we cannot see but feel immensely. Very well described. :)

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/30/2013 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much karen,,, very true a real force it is...really appreciate your, kind comment ty:0) cherie x
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 9:00:00 AM
    This gripped my heart intensely. I feel this piece within my past. Excellent job!

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/30/2013 8:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow Drake,,, truly appreciate your comment:) many thanks to you.... made me :) ty...cheriex
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 8:19:00 AM
    No one does it like you Cherrybunny.You have an original style of your own that I like.Oh and sorry for changing the bunny pick on CS.I actually put it back up because someone would have had me for supper.A fine write.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/1/2013 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Somebody say dramatic.Oh well we both had some whiskey to drink that night.Never will the bunny leave your side because you're someone special,just remember that always.Now go to bed..lol
    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/30/2013 7:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your so lovely M,,, thankyou for that comment....lol no way not bunny....ok maybe I was a lil dramatic lol,,,but glad hes back:) have a great night.....big hugz...cheriex