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Ice King

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Ice King

Have I been summons to your presence , only to be sacrificed.
In the coldness of your breath..i will be put to a icy cold death.
With one word, I exist or not.
It is only you whom can wear your arrogant crown of ice.

You care not at all about my loss in your icy Palace of shallow glory.
I will be forgotten and disquarded , not worthy of a story .
To be replaced by a new form of ice ,  that ice will only be disquarded like I have been.
There is no place in your frozen heart for anyone other then you .
Are you happy with  the cold Icy walls you have created in your palace Of self Worship .
You worship your self Self Ice king , surrounded by Sin.

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 11:37:00 AM
    Very creative and expressive winning work.Enjoyed reading today..Congrats..Sara

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/22/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you my friend Sara , I let the words just flow as I held a ice cube , many thoughts came to mind !
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:02:00 PM
    Hello Yvette, love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA .

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/19/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , I am very humbled by all your talents here .
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:23:00 PM
    - It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Yvette! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/19/2013 5:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you ! I feel so tiny amongst such beautiful Talent !
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Yvette, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/19/2013 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Skat ! I love your creative inspiration that guides people like myself ! Thank-you for doing all you do.
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 12:08:00 AM
    some glaring typo errors, the tale is as good as it gets, thank you for sharing and sorry if i said anything bad

    Morgan Avatar Danesh Morgan
    Date: 8/21/2013 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Congrats on your win. Morgan
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/30/2013 9:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You have said nothing bad at all , I am expressing old and new thoughts . I find everyone on the site to be imaginative and brave for writing . Thank-you ;)
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:30:00 PM
    I could be wrong, but the Ice King sounds like a stand in for an "Ex" of some sort? Well I can feel the iciness from here! So I'll have to clap with gloves on, good job on this one!!! And maybe a scarf too...LOL! MC

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 7/31/2013 7:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm quite sure I've known some Queens in my time....LOL!
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/30/2013 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Now I am editing my replys ! Oh No... you are at the top of the writiers list not " Ice King "list ~ TY ;)
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/29/2013 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well , You are very perceptive . I have met a few "Ice Kings " in my World ~ Thank-you for your inspirtaional words of kindness , You are on the top of the list ! Yvette