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to Edit

To Edit 
to recover 
to renew 
to rediscover 
to change the existing 
to realize my own mistakes 
to change the innocence
to redo the first words spoken 
can I fix the Broken ?
to Edit .

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  1. Date: 7/16/2014 8:36:00 AM
    I like it. No, edit that. I love it

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/16/2014 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're sweet and Adorable ~ You have me at ."No, edit that "
  1. Date: 7/14/2014 8:36:00 PM
    I really like that...great title too! Ana

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/15/2014 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you very much , you inspire me with kindness !
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 6:59:00 PM
    No thanks required Yvette, none at all. And absolutely, we can chat, I'd like that. MC

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 7/18/2014 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cool Busy Lady!
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/16/2014 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you know I still adore you my friend , will check soup mail soon, just a break from working 12 hr shifts !
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/7/2013 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Our Brave poet in war ..I wishing you come home soon , Thank-you for protecting us ~
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:24:00 PM
    Been here before, in poetry and in life. Kind of the same, it's said a poem is never really finished. I've edited poems after 20 years, life is the same way. Just when you think you've figure yourself out...you reinvent, you edit. This was very good, a lot in a few lines -Great Poem Yvette!!! MC

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 7/29/2013 11:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you . I love this site , it allows me to express and read others , so much Talent. you yourself are quite amazing ~ I guess we have to pass on to be the noticed ? Just a litle Humor there my Friend , Lots to chat about , Yvette Thank-you for serving Our Country .