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The Roll Top Desk

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The Roll Top Desk

She sits alone..
Everyone has said their final goodbyes
To her husband of sixty some years
Her seven children have never known
Or at least never mentioned..
How she never smiled

Just day to day
Did her job
Like the old man said
Woman..
Bring me my......

Now there across the room
The forbidden..
His roll top desk

Head always hung low
Eyes never meeting his

She rises
Lifts her head
Approaches defiantly

Rolls back the heavy top
She's dusted a million times
She touches the things unfamiliar

 Keys to the truck she never learned to drive
A checkbook she didn't know how to use
Legal papers she knew nothing about
His favorite cigarettes she couldn't smoke
His stash of booze she despised
Sat in the chair that was no longer HIS

Was this feeling loss?

7-29-2013
©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 7:49:00 AM
    Busy but a good week.

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 9:29:00 AM
    This is so powerful, I really felt this deep inside. So many woman of a certain generation are depicted here. So glad I reread this beauty.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 3/12/2014 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard..hope you are having a great week...
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Captivating read...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/23/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 6:57:00 PM
    Again so many woman lived like this, the woman's role, I bet a lot still do and why? why? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/23/2013 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Debbie....sorry so late...so little time in the summer....I just know some people are stronger than others....
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Some memorable phrases here... '...how she never smiled,' '...she's dusted a million times.' A poignant piece so well delivered. BRAVO Donna! Best wishes, Keith

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/23/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Keith....thanks....hope all is well.....:-)
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 12:52:00 AM
    Your story was inspiring Donna.Enjoyed reading this back here in the caribbean isle of Trinidad.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/23/2013 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much....ahhh wish I could visit just once somewhere like that..
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 3:11:00 PM
    Wow...the tone of this is brilliant. The sudden abscence of Patriarchy is is an exhilarating mix of loss and freedom, simultaneously. So well written. Congratulations. SuZ

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/6/2013 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much...
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on a very fine win, Donna! Excellent!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/6/2013 9:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Appreciated .:-)
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 12:05:00 PM
    MD....how touching! WOW! This is so true of many women here. You captured the essence of liberation so well here. I'm so proud of you! Congrats on your win! HUGS!!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/6/2013 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hugs hugs .thanks
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:50:00 AM
    Donna, Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/6/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. :-)
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Well done on a super win, Donna. Richard knows how to pick them. Certainly well-deserved. Licia :-)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/6/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So nice of you...thanks...
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:02:00 AM
    Donna, ... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/6/2013 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey....thanks!
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:44:00 AM
    really a great one.this poem shows the might of love the other way (in loss)touches deep. great write Donna.Congrats on your win. (:c Jenish.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/6/2013 9:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very kind..thank you
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:16:00 AM
    congrats on a great win Donna

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/6/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Joseph...thanks
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:23:00 AM
    I have known these woman,,they where.locked in a time period which was.difficult, to challenge, in that dominant generation. Excellent write. Very enlightened, read truly enjoyed Donna:) ty4sharing..cheriex

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/5/2013 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Congratulations on your win:)
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:50:00 PM
    My grandmother was very much the same...... It was so different in those days for women to branch out on their own.......it took such courage! Well done, Donna!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/2/2013 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Than you a lot Carrie ..
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 12:13:00 PM
    This is so perfect Donna and so needs to be said--what a sad state of affairs!! My aunt was like this and I'm glad she's enjoying life now----great poem!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/2/2013 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you much Craig....
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 6:43:00 PM
    A powerful write, Donna. Thank you for highlighting the scourge of female oppression. Well done, Donna. :-)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/2/2013 5:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-) thanks delysia
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 2:45:00 PM
    a powerful piece illustrating the plight of women in another era....well penned

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/2/2013 5:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 10:44:00 AM
    This work describes very defined roles in a family..Roles that say so very loud statements..However,some women were worse off in that the husband's control was more subtle..I hope that the future for women will be much better than previous years..Enjoyed reading this unique, descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/2/2013 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sara....yes things have for the most part changed...since women started working outside the home...but when they were totally dependent on men for money they felt trapped I guess or maybe just a different time in history...many things in history have changed for the better in my lifetime...and hopefully many more..
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