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Distant Reminder

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Distant Reminder

An anxious feather,
began to hover,
over a frozen lake of glass. 
Flying through fire, 
ever so higher. 
Into the memories of the long 
forgotten past.
Soaring above the mountain 
tops 
while slowly increasing speed.
The feather flew higher, 
with a distant reminder. 
Just how much a feather can 
see.
A gust of wind will take you 
anywhere.
If only the feather could 
receive.
A dash of hope, 
a touch of atmosphere.
Some wind and the will to go 
where ever you please.


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  1. Date: 7/29/2013 6:33:00 PM

    amazing.... simple and eloquent. dramatic entrance, escalating heart rate, or the unanswered question of what tomorrow might bring isn't necessary for a great poet like yourself!

    Davis Avatar Michael Davis Date: 7/29/2013 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the kind words.