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  1. Date: 8/1/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Oh my it is so hard to place one self in the mind of one suffering, the turmoil and desperation they are going through, praise be to GOD HIS hands were upon your friend,, great write, blessings to you and Fran, hugs sueellen

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 12:10:00 AM
    Fabulous write my angelica Vie,, as always so sweet and beautiful <3 congratulation for the Contest <3 Suki

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 10:19:00 AM
    Blew my heart out of the water here. Damn. Much respect to you for this strong piece.

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 5:40:00 AM
    good luck with this, sometimes people rather not here bout such pepole and ther problems so i applaud you for highlighting such an issue, in such an engaging way too, well done and all the best

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:03:00 PM
    Oh Perfect avatar. A very sad story. Society is over flowing with this misery. Thanks for sharing your experience Hugs to you my dear

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Your freaking me out with that new avatar *lol* Thanks for your visits Rose have a good night.

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest. I know you'll do well! A great story with a powerful message!...Milt

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Rose what a marvel of both pen and capture being on that edge of nowhere. Outstanding..I pray Fran is now OK.... PS. I really love your new avatar..

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 11:20:00 AM
    This is so well expressed and the style is gripping. Extrodinary!

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 11:13:00 AM
    so compelling that it touched my heart, v... great storyteller you are... you have a way with words and plots...:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Wow this so touching and well written Mysty:)..wish the win in the contest

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 4:23:00 AM
    You have sketched a powerful sad and touching true story Rose with all its pains and agonies. Great write my friend. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 12:16:00 AM
    This is a great write, and should go well in the contest, thanks for the read...Peter

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 6:19:00 PM
    This is a perfect entry into the suicide contest! Compared to this my poem is drab! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this evening! What a powerfully descriptive poem, I'm quite impressed, Great Work!!